This is the edited version:Lynnet wrote: ↑June 7th, 2020, 1:58 pmSection 6
~16:20- 17:20 There is some miscellaneous banging (a room-mate on the stairs and banging a door, perhaps). I'm not sure this could be edited out easily, without re-recording that passage. In future, it might be better to wait until the noise stops before continuing, then just editing out the pause.
~22:20-22:30 There are two long pauses, which disrupt the flow of the story
~29:32 stumble "he seems a pretty decent old f...chap"
I edited out the pauses, and re-record a section with the banging. This is the first time I've ever re-recorded something so I don't know if it's standing out too much. If so, I would redo it again.
As for the one at 29:32, the script actually say "he seems a pretty decent sort of old chap" and I think I read that pretty well without any stumbles... But if my pronunciation is not clear and I should also re-record that, please let me know. I haven't done anything with that part in this correction.
Finally, I also finished editing section 7 at around the same time so I'm uploading it along with the other one: