[COMPLETE] Silverpoints by John Gray-lny

[Lmnei]

Hi Rob -

I will take the last 10 open poems please -

I believe that is 3, 6, 12, 13, 14, 16, 23, 25, 28 and 29.

I will not take very long to record them....

Lynda

[RobMarland]

Hi Rob -

I will take the last 10 open poems please -

I believe that is 3, 6, 12, 13, 14, 16, 23, 25, 28 and 29.

I will not take very long to record them....

Lynda

I will never doubt you again!

[OooThatsNifty]

Sorry, I missed this one yesterday. Thanks for claiming.

No problem at all! Here they are, ready for PL:

#21 - Spleen:
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_21_gray_128kb.mp3
Length: 0:45

#27 - Sensation
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_27_gray_128kb.mp3
Length: 0:37

Thanks again - feedback welcomed, as always

[linny]

Well that was fast. To Readers Found we go!

[RobMarland]

Sorry, I missed this one yesterday. Thanks for claiming.

No problem at all! Here they are, ready for PL:

#21 - Spleen:
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_21_gray_128kb.mp3
Length: 0:45

#27 - Sensation
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_27_gray_128kb.mp3
Length: 0:37

Thanks again - feedback welcomed, as always

Great stuff! Thanks. Both PL OK.

[alanmapstone]

Section 18 - Parsifal

https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_18_gray_128kb.mp3
1:27

[RobMarland]

Section 18 - Parsifal

https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_18_gray_128kb.mp3
1:27

Thanks, Alan. PL OK.

[Lmnei]

Hi Rob -

Here are my first 5 recordings - bottom up just for fun!

https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_16_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:28
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_23_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:42
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_25_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:58
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_28_gray_128kb.mp3 - 3:17
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_29_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:51

Have a good day!

Lynda

[RobMarland]

Hi Rob -

Here are my first 5 recordings - bottom up just for fun!

https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_16_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:28
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_23_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:42
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_25_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:58
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_28_gray_128kb.mp3 - 3:17
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_29_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:51

Have a good day!

Lynda

Thanks, Lynda. Just one thing to fix in Section 28 at 2:15, please: in the Gutenberg text it says, and you read, "With nought hut thee to cherish and admire." It sounded odd so I checked a scan of the book and 'hut' should be 'but'.

All the rest, PL OK.

[Lmnei]

Hi Rob -

Thanks for the PL - here are the rest of my assigned sections plus Section 28 back for Spot PL -

https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_03_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:14
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_06_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:31
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_12_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:28
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_13_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:50
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_14_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:49

https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_28_gray_128kb.mp3 - 3:17 (no change)

Lynda

[linny]

(no change)

nice one.

[RobMarland]

Hi Rob -

Thanks for the PL - here are the rest of my assigned sections plus Section 28 back for Spot PL -

https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_03_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:14
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_06_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:31
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_12_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:28
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_13_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:50
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_14_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:49

https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_28_gray_128kb.mp3 - 3:17 (no change)

Lynda

Thanks, Lynda.

12:
40 secs "Sinewy though she be; love-lorn
Convolvuluses cease to creep."

I hear 'through' instead of 'though'. Also, would you mind re-reading both lines because I don't think I would guess what 'convolvuluses' was. Forvo has a suggested pronunciation: https://forvo.com/search/convolvulus/en/

I wouldn't normally ask for re-reads for pronunciation but seeing as I am asking for another edit in the same poem, I hope you don't mind.

Also, last word of the poem: I hear "grasp" instead of "gasp".


14:
Could you please re-read this line?
"Heart's dear demesne, dear Daintiness"
I'm asking mainly for 'daintiness', which I don't quite hear from the reading. However, if you could re-do the whole line that would be good because I looked up the pronunciation of 'demesne' (never heard that word before) and apparently it is like 'domain'.


3,6,13,28 are PL OK.

[Lmnei]

Hi Rob -

Here are Sections 12 and 14 optimized

https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_12_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:27
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_14_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:49

Lynda

[RobMarland]

Hi Rob -

Here are Sections 12 and 14 optimized

https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_12_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:27
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_14_gray_128kb.mp3 - 1:49

Lynda

Thanks a lot, Lynda. Both PL OK.

[silverquill]

Here are my two poems for this work:

https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_07_gray_128kb.mp3 1:54
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/silverpoints_19_gray_128kb.mp3 2:13