COMPLETE Mother Earth Vol.1 No.4 - rap

stoogeswoman · Post by **stoogeswoman** » June 16th, 2020, 11:12 am

OK, Section 16 ready for PL now as well!

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_16_various_128kb.mp3 11:44

bhavya · Post by **bhavya** » June 17th, 2020, 10:02 pm

Thank you! Section 11 is PL OK!

TwoRavens · Post by **TwoRavens** » June 23rd, 2020, 4:44 pm

Here is section 14, ready for PL.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_14_various_128kb.mp3 14:50

All the best, Stephen

stoogeswoman · Post by **stoogeswoman** » June 23rd, 2020, 5:41 pm

Thanks, Stephen! It's ready for PL, which I'll do shortly.

TwoRavens wrote: ↑
June 23rd, 2020, 4:44 pm
Here is section 14, ready for PL.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_14_various_128kb.mp3 14:50

All the best, Stephen

stoogeswoman · Post by **stoogeswoman** » June 23rd, 2020, 6:04 pm

PL notes for Stephen, Section 14 -- some VERY minor changes! Otherwise, great reading!

2:09 -- you left out the word "a" in "a hard and bitter struggle"

5:31: you said "attempts" (plural) instead of "attempt" (singular) here: "As already stated, the violent attempt to kill trade unionism"

10:44: you left out the word "often" in "for the more often their names appear in the papers;"

Post by **Rapunzelina** » June 24th, 2020, 12:44 am

Reading the PL notes for Section 14, these can be optional fixes since they don't change the meaning of the sentence. I will mark the section PL OK, but, Stephen, feel free to make the changes if you feel so inclined

Edited to add: Same goes for Section 15, which I noticed when I went to edit the Magic Window

By the way, Christine, do you have some PLing your section 16 or could I PL it?

bhavya · Post by **bhavya** » June 24th, 2020, 1:28 am

Rapunzelina wrote: ↑
June 24th, 2020, 12:44 am
Reading the PL notes for Section 14, these can be optional fixes since they don't change the meaning of the sentence. I will mark the section PL OK, but, Stephen, feel free to make the changes if you feel so inclined

Edited to add: Same goes for Section 15, which I noticed when I went to edit the Magic Window

By the way, Christine, do you have some PLing your section 16 or could I PL it?

Hi, I am PL'ing her section, but if you would like to PL it, that's okay with me

Post by **Rapunzelina** » June 24th, 2020, 1:36 am

Right, you have an arrangement, I will leave you to it then

stoogeswoman · Post by **stoogeswoman** » June 24th, 2020, 8:34 am

Rapunzelina wrote: ↑
June 24th, 2020, 12:44 am
Reading the PL notes for Section 14, these can be optional fixes since they don't change the meaning of the sentence. I will mark the section PL OK, but, Stephen, feel free to make the changes if you feel so inclined

Edited to add: Same goes for Section 15, which I noticed when I went to edit the Magic Window

By the way, Christine, do you have some PLing your section 16 or could I PL it?

Of course -- as I just PM'd you, the reader is completely free to decide what to do with the information I give when I PL. If I was overly nitpicky, my apologies!

Perhaps bhavya should take over as DPL from this point on. I didn't mean to hurt anyone's feelings.

Post by **Rapunzelina** » June 24th, 2020, 10:05 am

That's alright! Nobody's feelings are hurt and that shows from your excellent interaction with the readers, Christine!

In fact, my apologies, if I could have been more tactful. Thank you for everything you do in the project!

bhavya · Post by **bhavya** » June 24th, 2020, 9:49 pm

Rapunzelina wrote: ↑
June 24th, 2020, 1:36 am
Right, you have an arrangement, I will leave you to it then

Okay, I'll get to it by today.

bhavya · Post by **bhavya** » June 25th, 2020, 8:06 am

Sectin 16 is PL OK, great reading Christine

stoogeswoman · Post by **stoogeswoman** » June 25th, 2020, 4:21 pm

bhavya wrote: ↑
June 25th, 2020, 8:06 am
Sectin 16 is PL OK, great reading Christine

Thank you!

maxgal · Post by **maxgal** » June 25th, 2020, 6:57 pm

I am preparing section 7, "The Antichrist" by Nietzche.

Here's my Q...

The piece starts with this note, which obviously is not part of the text itself:
From "The Antichrist," by Friedrich Nietzsche. Edited by Alexander Tille, translated by Thomas Common. Publishers: Macmillan & Co. New York.

Should I read this, or can I skip it and dive right into "I make war against this theological instinct...." ?

...LJB

stoogeswoman · Post by **stoogeswoman** » June 25th, 2020, 7:31 pm

Yes, I think it would be best to read it, since that's what's in the text. Thanks for checking!

maxgal wrote: ↑
June 25th, 2020, 6:57 pm
I am preparing section 7, "The Antichrist" by Nietzche.

Here's my Q...

The piece starts with this note, which obviously is not part of the text itself:
From "The Antichrist," by Friedrich Nietzsche. Edited by Alexander Tille, translated by Thomas Common. Publishers: Macmillan & Co. New York.

Should I read this, or can I skip it and dive right into "I make war against this theological instinct...." ?

...LJB