COMPLETE: {SOLO} Europe and Elsewhere by Mark Twain - lny
Section 12 Spot PL OK
Section 13 PL OK
Section 14 PL Notes-
6:58 ..down to the Roman…
(didn’t say the word “the”)
18:26 ...men as through a dimming…
(said the word “though” not “through”)
27:44 ...colleges-- but not get them…
(said the word “and” not “but”)
40:44 ...average of 165 miles…
(said the word “160” not “165”)
Section 15 PL Notes-
13:43 ...It was up a back alley…
(didn’t say the word “up”)
13:50 ...for the moneyed races…
(didn’t say the word “the”)
20:37 ...was a railway map of…
(said the word “railroad” not “railway”)
Section 16 PL Notes-
3:34 ...Is our unchivalric conduct…
(said “it” after the word “is”)
6:05 ...drove all the Jews out…
(didn’t day “the”)
8:01 ...or this compliment?
(said “is” after the word “or”)
Section 17 PL Notes-
18:13 ...the duel then terminated.
(said “was” instead of “then”)
Section 18 PL Notes-
2:10 ...should work wherever there…
(said “whenever” not “wherever”)
Sorry it took me so long to get everything listened. Great Job!
Section 13 PL OK
Section 14 PL Notes-
6:58 ..down to the Roman…
(didn’t say the word “the”)
18:26 ...men as through a dimming…
(said the word “though” not “through”)
27:44 ...colleges-- but not get them…
(said the word “and” not “but”)
40:44 ...average of 165 miles…
(said the word “160” not “165”)
Section 15 PL Notes-
13:43 ...It was up a back alley…
(didn’t say the word “up”)
13:50 ...for the moneyed races…
(didn’t say the word “the”)
20:37 ...was a railway map of…
(said the word “railroad” not “railway”)
Section 16 PL Notes-
3:34 ...Is our unchivalric conduct…
(said “it” after the word “is”)
6:05 ...drove all the Jews out…
(didn’t day “the”)
8:01 ...or this compliment?
(said “is” after the word “or”)
Section 17 PL Notes-
18:13 ...the duel then terminated.
(said “was” instead of “then”)
Section 18 PL Notes-
2:10 ...should work wherever there…
(said “whenever” not “wherever”)
Sorry it took me so long to get everything listened. Great Job!
Carisa
"Anything's better than lying and deceit." -Leo Tolstoy, Anna Karenina
"Anything's better than lying and deceit." -Leo Tolstoy, Anna Karenina
14-18 corrected!!cimt wrote: ↑June 7th, 2020, 7:32 am Section 12 Spot PL OK
Section 13 PL OK
Section 14 PL Notes-
6:58 ..down to the Roman…
(didn’t say the word “the”)
18:26 ...men as through a dimming…
(said the word “though” not “through”)
27:44 ...colleges-- but not get them…
(said the word “and” not “but”)
40:44 ...average of 165 miles…
(said the word “160” not “165”)
Section 15 PL Notes-
13:43 ...It was up a back alley…
(didn’t say the word “up”)
13:50 ...for the moneyed races…
(didn’t say the word “the”)
20:37 ...was a railway map of…
(said the word “railroad” not “railway”)
Section 16 PL Notes-
3:34 ...Is our unchivalric conduct…
(said “it” after the word “is”)
6:05 ...drove all the Jews out…
(didn’t day “the”)
8:01 ...or this compliment?
(said “is” after the word “or”)
Section 17 PL Notes-
18:13 ...the duel then terminated.
(said “was” instead of “then”)
Section 18 PL Notes-
2:10 ...should work wherever there…
(said “whenever” not “wherever”)
Sorry it took me so long to get everything listened. Great Job!
Thanks "Eagle Ears"!!!!
The Trouble is,
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
14-18 Corrections sound great!johng wrote: ↑June 7th, 2020, 11:04 am14-18 corrected!!cimt wrote: ↑June 7th, 2020, 7:32 am Section 12 Spot PL OK
Section 13 PL OK
Section 14 PL Notes-
6:58 ..down to the Roman…
(didn’t say the word “the”)
18:26 ...men as through a dimming…
(said the word “though” not “through”)
27:44 ...colleges-- but not get them…
(said the word “and” not “but”)
40:44 ...average of 165 miles…
(said the word “160” not “165”)
Section 15 PL Notes-
13:43 ...It was up a back alley…
(didn’t say the word “up”)
13:50 ...for the moneyed races…
(didn’t say the word “the”)
20:37 ...was a railway map of…
(said the word “railroad” not “railway”)
Section 16 PL Notes-
3:34 ...Is our unchivalric conduct…
(said “it” after the word “is”)
6:05 ...drove all the Jews out…
(didn’t day “the”)
8:01 ...or this compliment?
(said “is” after the word “or”)
Section 17 PL Notes-
18:13 ...the duel then terminated.
(said “was” instead of “then”)
Section 18 PL Notes-
2:10 ...should work wherever there…
(said “whenever” not “wherever”)
Sorry it took me so long to get everything listened. Great Job!
Thanks "Eagle Ears"!!!!
Carisa
"Anything's better than lying and deceit." -Leo Tolstoy, Anna Karenina
"Anything's better than lying and deceit." -Leo Tolstoy, Anna Karenina
19-25 are done
The Trouble is,
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
Section 21 PL Notes-
10:42 ...of God that a bystander...
(said "but")
29:42 ...morals and law, the...
(said "laws")
39:28 ...no other witness is necessary.
(the words witness and is blend together to "witnesses," it could probably be fixed if said a little slower)
Section 22 PL OK
Section 23 PL OK
Section 24 PL Notes
1:11 ...to the citizen by the...
(said citizens)
Sorry about jumping to the middle of the completed sections, but I have limited time at this moment. I will revisit the rest of the chapters plus any new ones on Sunday.
10:42 ...of God that a bystander...
(said "but")
29:42 ...morals and law, the...
(said "laws")
39:28 ...no other witness is necessary.
(the words witness and is blend together to "witnesses," it could probably be fixed if said a little slower)
Section 22 PL OK
Section 23 PL OK
Section 24 PL Notes
1:11 ...to the citizen by the...
(said citizens)
Sorry about jumping to the middle of the completed sections, but I have limited time at this moment. I will revisit the rest of the chapters plus any new ones on Sunday.
Carisa
"Anything's better than lying and deceit." -Leo Tolstoy, Anna Karenina
"Anything's better than lying and deceit." -Leo Tolstoy, Anna Karenina
Thanks for all you have time for!!!
Crazy times require calm reflection and little or no hassles... so take your time !!
And Thanks!!!
Crazy times require calm reflection and little or no hassles... so take your time !!
And Thanks!!!
The Trouble is,
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
21 and 24 are correctedcimt wrote: ↑June 12th, 2020, 6:43 am Section 21 PL Notes-
10:42 ...of God that a bystander...
(said "but")
29:42 ...morals and law, the...
(said "laws")
39:28 ...no other witness is necessary.
(the words witness and is blend together to "witnesses," it could probably be fixed if said a little slower)
Section 22 PL OK
Section 23 PL OK
Section 24 PL Notes
1:11 ...to the citizen by the...
(said citizens)
and
26 is done
The Trouble is,
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
Section 19 PL Notes
5:57 ...regulator in cases of...
(said case)
13:21 ...not so, but we...
(didn't say "but")
19:00 ...called for seven volunteers...
(said seventeen)
Section 20 PL Notes
6:42 ...in the Province of Chili...
(said Provinces)
15:46 ...not be a better...
(didn't say "a")
23:39 ...perhaps they can afford it...
(said could)
34:08 ...thing which we could not...
(didn't say "we")
40:31 ...liberties, and we must...
(said but)
45:47 ...uneasy. And our flag...
(didn't say "and")
Section 21 Spot PL OK
Section 24 Spot PL OK
Section 25 PL OK
Section 26 PL OK
Great Job! You're getting closer to finishing each day!
5:57 ...regulator in cases of...
(said case)
13:21 ...not so, but we...
(didn't say "but")
19:00 ...called for seven volunteers...
(said seventeen)
Section 20 PL Notes
6:42 ...in the Province of Chili...
(said Provinces)
15:46 ...not be a better...
(didn't say "a")
23:39 ...perhaps they can afford it...
(said could)
34:08 ...thing which we could not...
(didn't say "we")
40:31 ...liberties, and we must...
(said but)
45:47 ...uneasy. And our flag...
(didn't say "and")
Section 21 Spot PL OK
Section 24 Spot PL OK
Section 25 PL OK
Section 26 PL OK
Great Job! You're getting closer to finishing each day!
Carisa
"Anything's better than lying and deceit." -Leo Tolstoy, Anna Karenina
"Anything's better than lying and deceit." -Leo Tolstoy, Anna Karenina
19 and 20 are corrected
The Trouble is,
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
27 is done
The Trouble is,
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
28 is done!
The Trouble is,
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
29-32 are done
The Trouble is,
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
Section 28 PL Notes
1:00 ...on a basis of...
(said "the" instead)
8:49 ...sighed at thought of his...
(said "the" before "thought")
13:52 ...like a breath from hell...
(said "of" instead of "from")
Section 29 PL OK
Section 30 PL Notes
0:22 ...We were ignorant, and...
(said "innocent" instead of "ignorant")
5:14 ...and kept them warm against...
(said "him" instead of "them")
Section 31 PL OK
Section 32 PL OK
Carisa
"Anything's better than lying and deceit." -Leo Tolstoy, Anna Karenina
"Anything's better than lying and deceit." -Leo Tolstoy, Anna Karenina
28 and 30 are corrected
The Trouble is,
you think you have Time.
-Buddha
you think you have Time.
-Buddha