[COMPLETE] American Leaders and Heroes by Wilbur F. Gordy - icequeen
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Thank you!HannahYu7 wrote: ↑June 10th, 2020, 2:09 am This is my chapter 25~ https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/americanleaders_25_gordy.mp3
But, you forgot to give the file length mm:ss
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Thank you!msmay31 wrote: ↑June 10th, 2020, 2:29 pm Here is chapter 13.
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/americanleaders_13_gordy_128kb.mp3
Duration is 9:22.
This is in the MW Ready for PL.
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Sorry the full length is 13:12silverquill wrote: ↑June 10th, 2020, 8:37 pmThank you!HannahYu7 wrote: ↑June 10th, 2020, 2:09 am This is my chapter 25~ https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/americanleaders_25_gordy.mp3
But, you forgot to give the file length mm:ss
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tcjsavannah wrote: ↑June 8th, 2020, 7:10 am Here are my chapters
Chapter 17
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/americanleaders_17_gordy_128kb.mp3
12:37
Chapter 18
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/americanleaders_18_gordy_128kb.mp3
13:28
Chapter 19
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/americanleaders_19_gordy_128kb.mp3
12:48
-- Chad
Section 19 is PL OK
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HannahYu7 wrote: ↑June 10th, 2020, 2:09 am This is my chapter 25~ https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/americanleaders_25_gordy.mp3
Section 25 on U.S. Grant:
Please revise file name to read americanleaders_25_gordy_128kb
In the opening title, you said 1822-1825 should be 1822-1885
At 1:03 and 1:08, you can say Ohio instead of "O." I realize that is what the text says, but since this is for children, saying the full name of the state would definitely be a help.
At 10:59 you said "...he said to himself... " should be "he said of himself"
At 12:31 I heard "..tour around the word.." should be "tour around the world"
A slight pause here and there, especially between paragraphs, would greatly help the pacing.
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Section 13 is PL OKmsmay31 wrote: ↑June 10th, 2020, 2:29 pm Here is chapter 13.
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/americanleaders_13_gordy_128kb.mp3
Duration is 9:22.
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Here are chapters 17 and 18 with the corrections!
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/americanleaders_17_gordy_128kb.mp3
12:37
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/americanleaders_18_gordy_128kb.mp3
13:28
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/americanleaders_17_gordy_128kb.mp3
12:37
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/americanleaders_18_gordy_128kb.mp3
13:28
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Thank you! 17 and 18 are PL OK
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You've got it!
Thanks.
On the road again, so delays are possible
~ Larry
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I've made some changes here and there, hope it goes better this time. The length is 13:18 min.RitaBoutros wrote: ↑June 11th, 2020, 4:59 amHannahYu7 wrote: ↑June 10th, 2020, 2:09 am This is my chapter 25~ https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/americanleaders_25_gordy.mp3
Section 25 on U.S. Grant:
Please revise file name to read americanleaders_25_gordy_128kb
In the opening title, you said 1822-1825 should be 1822-1885
At 1:03 and 1:08, you can say Ohio instead of "O." I realize that is what the text says, but since this is for children, saying the full name of the state would definitely be a help.
At 10:59 you said "...he said to himself... " should be "he said of himself"
At 12:31 I heard "..tour around the word.." should be "tour around the world"
A slight pause here and there, especially between paragraphs, would greatly help the pacing.
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/americanleaders_25_gordy_128kb.mp3
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Thank you Hannah - excellent job on the corrections.
There is still one error at :22 where you give the dates. His date of death should be 1885, not 1825 (which makes him 3 years of age!)
There is still one error at :22 where you give the dates. His date of death should be 1885, not 1825 (which makes him 3 years of age!)