COMPLETE Mother Earth Vol.1 No.4 - rap

bhavya · Post by **bhavya** » June 8th, 2020, 11:44 pm

Thank you all!

stoogeswoman · Post by **stoogeswoman** » June 9th, 2020, 8:32 am

Weezer, first of all, excellent reading! I love your style!

Just a couple of tiny PL Notes:

1. At 07:50, you read: "They're murdering us" instead of "them" in this sentence:

Blows were struck in a lusty fashion and cries of "Police!" "They're murdering them!" "Help!" rang out.

2. At 08:14, you put the word "and" in the wrong place in this sentence:

a girl, still in her teens, broke through the crowd and turning to Havel, said:

(you read "through the crowd, turning to Havel, and said").

That's it - thanks!

weezer wrote: ↑June 8th, 2020, 7:21 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_4_various_128kb.mp3
duration- 10 minutes
Thanks. Weezer

weezer · Post by **weezer** » June 9th, 2020, 9:39 am

I would like to claim section 6 please
Thanks. Weezer

stoogeswoman · Post by **stoogeswoman** » June 9th, 2020, 9:51 am

weezer wrote: ↑June 9th, 2020, 9:39 am I would like to claim section 6 please
Thanks. Weezer

OK, you've got it!

weezer · Post by **weezer** » June 9th, 2020, 10:03 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_4_various_128kb.mp3
duration 10 minutes
corrected narration
Thanks. Weeezer

weezer · Post by **weezer** » June 9th, 2020, 10:41 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_6_various_128kb.mp3
duration: 2:51 minutes
Thanks. Weezer

stoogeswoman · Post by **stoogeswoman** » June 9th, 2020, 4:45 pm

weezer wrote: ↑June 9th, 2020, 10:41 am https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_6_various_128kb.mp3
duration: 2:51 minutes
Thanks. Weezer

Great, thanks -- both section 4 and 6 are now PL OK!

StevenW · Post by **StevenW** » June 14th, 2020, 12:41 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_12_various_128kb.mp3

Just uploaded Section 12, Dignity Speaks.

This was a really cool reading, especially in light of the current worldwide sociopolitical climate. It is different than anything I've yet attempted. Dignity felt kind of like a sarcastic jerk here, so that's what I tried to sound like. Hopefully it does the text justice.

stoogeswoman · Post by **stoogeswoman** » June 14th, 2020, 2:52 pm

Great, thank you so much! I will proof it this afternoon or tomorrow morning (depending on, well, a buncha stuff!

)!

StevenW wrote: ↑June 14th, 2020, 12:41 am https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_12_various_128kb.mp3

Just uploaded Section 12, Dignity Speaks.

This was a really cool reading, especially in light of the current worldwide sociopolitical climate. It is different than anything I've yet attempted. Dignity felt kind of like a sarcastic jerk here, so that's what I tried to sound like. Hopefully it does the text justice.

stoogeswoman · Post by **stoogeswoman** » June 14th, 2020, 4:15 pm

UPDATE: PL OK! Great job, and yes, I do see what you mean about its relevance to today!

stoogeswoman wrote: ↑June 14th, 2020, 2:52 pm Great, thank you so much! I will proof it this afternoon or tomorrow morning (depending on, well, a buncha stuff! )!

StevenW wrote: ↑June 14th, 2020, 12:41 am https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_12_various_128kb.mp3

Just uploaded Section 12, Dignity Speaks.

This was a really cool reading, especially in light of the current worldwide sociopolitical climate. It is different than anything I've yet attempted. Dignity felt kind of like a sarcastic jerk here, so that's what I tried to sound like. Hopefully it does the text justice.

maxgal · Post by **maxgal** » June 15th, 2020, 1:16 pm

I'm sorry, lots of stuff is delaying me...
I don't want to hold up the project, so please take back sections 9 ("Marriage & Motherhood") and 16 ("The Jungle").

I'm still aiming to do section 7 ("The Antichrist").

...LJB

stoogeswoman · Post by **stoogeswoman** » June 15th, 2020, 1:25 pm

Oh, sorry to hear that, but I totally understand! If you change your mind, just let us know.

Sections 9 and 16 are now open!

maxgal wrote: ↑June 15th, 2020, 1:16 pm I'm sorry, lots of stuff is delaying me...
I don't want to hold up the project, so please take back sections 9 ("Marriage & Motherhood") and 16 ("The Jungle").
I'm still aiming to do section 7 ("The Antichrist").
...LJB

stoogeswoman · Post by **stoogeswoman** » June 15th, 2020, 4:46 pm

I've claimed sections 11 and 16, and 11 is done. I'll work on 16 tomorrow.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_11_various_128kb.mp3 01:30

bhavya · Post by **bhavya** » June 16th, 2020, 7:22 am

stoogeswoman wrote: ↑June 15th, 2020, 4:46 pm I've claimed sections 11 and 16, and 11 is done. I'll work on 16 tomorrow.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_11_various_128kb.mp3 01:30

Thank you, I'll pl your sections

stoogeswoman · Post by **stoogeswoman** » June 16th, 2020, 11:06 am

Thanks, bhavya. I'll also be uploading Section 16 in just a few minutes.

bhavya wrote: ↑June 16th, 2020, 7:22 am
stoogeswoman wrote: ↑June 15th, 2020, 4:46 pm I've claimed sections 11 and 16, and 11 is done. I'll work on 16 tomorrow.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_11_various_128kb.mp3 01:30
Thank you, I'll pl your sections