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stoogeswoman
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Post by stoogeswoman » May 29th, 2020, 11:59 am

Just one SUPER-minor PL note (02:34 - s/be "wifely duty" rather than "duties") -- but overall, wonderful! Love how you nailed Emma Goldman's accent, too! 8-)
lunarbaby wrote:
May 29th, 2020, 11:21 am
Hello! Here is Section 5: A Letter.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_05_various_128kb.mp3
File Duration: 5:53

lunarbaby
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Post by lunarbaby » May 30th, 2020, 12:02 pm

Thanks! It was fun trying to do a Russian accent! :) Here is the revised version.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_05_various_128kb.mp3
File Duration: 5:52
stoogeswoman wrote:
May 29th, 2020, 11:59 am
Just one SUPER-minor PL note (02:34 - s/be "wifely duty" rather than "duties") -- but overall, wonderful! Love how you nailed Emma Goldman's accent, too! 8-)
lunarbaby wrote:
May 29th, 2020, 11:21 am
Hello! Here is Section 5: A Letter.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_05_various_128kb.mp3
File Duration: 5:53

stoogeswoman
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Post by stoogeswoman » May 30th, 2020, 7:54 pm

That's perfect -- PL OK! (Oh yeah, and I guess that was a Russian accent, huh? :D sorry about that!) You obviously put a great deal of work into that -- such a pleasure to listen to! 8-)
lunarbaby wrote:
May 30th, 2020, 12:02 pm
Thanks! It was fun trying to do a Russian accent! :) Here is the revised version.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_05_various_128kb.mp3
File Duration: 5:52
stoogeswoman wrote:
May 29th, 2020, 11:59 am
Just one SUPER-minor PL note (02:34 - s/be "wifely duty" rather than "duties") -- but overall, wonderful! Love how you nailed Emma Goldman's accent, too! 8-)
lunarbaby wrote:
May 29th, 2020, 11:21 am
Hello! Here is Section 5: A Letter.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_05_various_128kb.mp3
File Duration: 5:53

TwoRavens
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Post by TwoRavens » May 31st, 2020, 11:20 am

May I have Section 14, please?
Cheers,
Stephen

stoogeswoman
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Post by stoogeswoman » May 31st, 2020, 6:14 pm

You got it! 8-)
TwoRavens wrote:
May 31st, 2020, 11:20 am
May I have Section 14, please?
Cheers,
Stephen

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Post by bhavya » June 1st, 2020, 8:57 pm

Thank you both!

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Post by TwoRavens » June 2nd, 2020, 12:01 pm

stoogeswoman wrote:
May 31st, 2020, 6:14 pm
You got it! 8-)
TwoRavens wrote:
May 31st, 2020, 11:20 am
May I have Section 14, please?
Cheers,
Stephen
Thanks very much!

StevenW
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Post by StevenW » June 5th, 2020, 2:33 am

Can I claim Section 12, Dignity Speaks? Thanks.

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Post by bhavya » June 5th, 2020, 5:26 am

StevenW wrote:
June 5th, 2020, 2:33 am
Can I claim Section 12, Dignity Speaks? Thanks.
Thanks!

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Post by lethargilistic » June 5th, 2020, 7:15 pm

I'd like Section 15, Refined Cruelty.
Mike


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Post by bhavya » June 6th, 2020, 3:34 am

Thank you :)

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Post by stoogeswoman » June 6th, 2020, 7:13 pm

Great work, Mike! 8-) There are just a couple of teensy little PL notes:

01:59: You left out the word "are" in "No shackles are on their hands or feet"
03:10: You said "one another" instead of "each other": "Even in our every-day relations with each other"
04:25 You said "and there are, therefore": "and are, therefore, difficult to deal with"

Thanks!!

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Post by weezer » June 8th, 2020, 7:21 pm


stoogeswoman
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Post by stoogeswoman » June 8th, 2020, 10:46 pm

Hi -- sorry, I hadn't seen a request from you to be assigned that section! It's fine, I've got you in there now, and you're ready for PL! I'll work on that tomorrow as it's beddy-bye time out here. Thanks! 8-)
weezer wrote:
June 8th, 2020, 7:21 pm
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_4_various_128kb.mp3
duration- 10 minutes
Thanks. Weezer

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