COMPLETE Mother Earth Vol.1 No.4 - rap

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stoogeswoman
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Post by stoogeswoman »

Just one SUPER-minor PL note (02:34 - s/be "wifely duty" rather than "duties") -- but overall, wonderful! Love how you nailed Emma Goldman's accent, too! 8-)
lunarbaby wrote: May 29th, 2020, 11:21 am Hello! Here is Section 5: A Letter.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_05_various_128kb.mp3
File Duration: 5:53
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Post by lunarbaby »

Thanks! It was fun trying to do a Russian accent! :) Here is the revised version.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_05_various_128kb.mp3
File Duration: 5:52
stoogeswoman wrote: May 29th, 2020, 11:59 am Just one SUPER-minor PL note (02:34 - s/be "wifely duty" rather than "duties") -- but overall, wonderful! Love how you nailed Emma Goldman's accent, too! 8-)
lunarbaby wrote: May 29th, 2020, 11:21 am Hello! Here is Section 5: A Letter.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_05_various_128kb.mp3
File Duration: 5:53
stoogeswoman
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Post by stoogeswoman »

That's perfect -- PL OK! (Oh yeah, and I guess that was a Russian accent, huh? :D sorry about that!) You obviously put a great deal of work into that -- such a pleasure to listen to! 8-)
lunarbaby wrote: May 30th, 2020, 12:02 pm Thanks! It was fun trying to do a Russian accent! :) Here is the revised version.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_05_various_128kb.mp3
File Duration: 5:52
stoogeswoman wrote: May 29th, 2020, 11:59 am Just one SUPER-minor PL note (02:34 - s/be "wifely duty" rather than "duties") -- but overall, wonderful! Love how you nailed Emma Goldman's accent, too! 8-)
lunarbaby wrote: May 29th, 2020, 11:21 am Hello! Here is Section 5: A Letter.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_05_various_128kb.mp3
File Duration: 5:53
TwoRavens
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Post by TwoRavens »

May I have Section 14, please?
Cheers,
Stephen
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Post by stoogeswoman »

You got it! 8-)
TwoRavens wrote: May 31st, 2020, 11:20 am May I have Section 14, please?
Cheers,
Stephen
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Thank you both!
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stoogeswoman wrote: May 31st, 2020, 6:14 pm You got it! 8-)
TwoRavens wrote: May 31st, 2020, 11:20 am May I have Section 14, please?
Cheers,
Stephen
Thanks very much!
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Post by StevenW »

Can I claim Section 12, Dignity Speaks? Thanks.
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StevenW wrote: June 5th, 2020, 2:33 am Can I claim Section 12, Dignity Speaks? Thanks.
Thanks!
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Post by lethargilistic »

I'd like Section 15, Refined Cruelty.
Mike
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Thank you :)
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Post by stoogeswoman »

Great work, Mike! 8-) There are just a couple of teensy little PL notes:

01:59: You left out the word "are" in "No shackles are on their hands or feet"
03:10: You said "one another" instead of "each other": "Even in our every-day relations with each other"
04:25 You said "and there are, therefore": "and are, therefore, difficult to deal with"

Thanks!!
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Post by stoogeswoman »

Hi -- sorry, I hadn't seen a request from you to be assigned that section! It's fine, I've got you in there now, and you're ready for PL! I'll work on that tomorrow as it's beddy-bye time out here. Thanks! 8-)
weezer wrote: June 8th, 2020, 7:21 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/motherearth4_4_various_128kb.mp3
duration- 10 minutes
Thanks. Weezer
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