Thank you for the encouragment.williamjones wrote: ↑May 19th, 2020, 6:57 pm PL Notes for section 1 & 2
I kinda feel bad about mentioning some slips in your recitations, Kevin.
Why? Because your recitions are so darned good!
It has been a while since I've listened to one of your sections. I am gob smacked at how good you've become. Wow!
In these two sections there is mention a particular flower, the DAHLIA, as in the famous book and movie, "The Black Dahlia". Can't figure out why, but when you first read the text your brain dropped a stitch and said Delilah, the name of Samson's barber(!) and wife come out of your mouth. Every time that flower's name (DAHLIA) appeared, you said DAHLILAH. I think I found them all and their positions appear in PL Notes.
AND I KNOW WHY!!! You made that simple error just to make us more mortal readers feel better.
PART 1 PLnotes
12:38 heard “I suppose WE must,"
s/b “I suppose you must,"
(kinda trivial)
14:50 heard "Dalilahs" (Samson's biblical barber)
s/b "Dahlias"
error repeated twice in the next sentence, too.
19:56 Repeated: "the roused spirit of the bush"
PART 2 PL notes
1:06 Daliliahs again!! s/b Dahlias
2:19 again
3:15 again
5:12
5:14
6:25
6:01 repeat "Come and see!"
14:20 Repeated: "It is the distinction between the proletariat"
This is really a good presentation, Kevin. I hope you'll take more sections in this project.
I'll get on these corrections as soon as I can. Been feeling a bit under the weather and hosting a sibling. Uff!