Hello Colton,
Nicely done. Are you using Audacity? If so please select View>Show clipping. Now you should see a number of red lines scattered throughout your reading. This is when you would louder than than the program could record. Too much clipping leads to distortion so it's something to keep an eye on.
For this recording, please make the following corrections:
3:54 repeat - p15. ...he feels a trust committed to him
to keep and fulfils it.
5:49 word change p16. which is self-sustained as it is
self-derived
6:11 repeat -
the would be
9:16 word change p18. ...but that she existed for her people, and the
quick and tender open-minded sympathy...
10:51 stumble p19. ...or creatures whose bodies answer as readily to the ruling of the spirit as does the ship
to the helm.
11:03 word change p19. We all know the
child who is fully willing to do the right thing...
11:12 stumble p19. ...but with whom bodily vis inertia
is strong enough
12:24 word change p20. ...in response to his own, is to
make a man of him.
12:46 word change p20. ...and it
rests with parents to give their children...
17:06 repeat -
vis inertia
18:55 word change p.23. I am not proposing a one-
sided arrangement, ...
19:50 word change p24. ...because to them it means quiet rest and
gaiety of heart.
Extend ending silence to 5 seconds. At the current 3.5 seconds there is a risk of being cut off during playback.
Please post the length of your file when you post the link. Let me know if you have any questions.
