Here you go: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/blackcat0105feb1896_1_various_128kb.mp3Kitty wrote: ↑May 10th, 2020, 5:35 amaaaaaah, I was screaming aloud in frustration at the ending here. Why oh why can't we know what was written on the card ? This story was extremely agonizing just for that mystery alone. I love a good mystery but it needs to be solved in the end. Guess we'll never know, but the woman was some supernatural element, otherwise the card would not have been erased in the end. Intriguing somehow.queenk8 wrote: ↑May 9th, 2020, 9:42 amSection 1 is ready for PL:
Wonderfully narrated again, Kate. Thank you so much.
There are a few snippets I would suggest though:
> at 23:10: (p. 9) after "that he see this woman" there is a bit of a coughing sound, which can be cut out
> at 24:14: (p. 9) after "I wanted you to...to..." a pause of 2.5 seconds feels quite long to wait for the story to continue, I would cut this part by one second at least
> at 24:22: (p. 9) "and she fell back" - not sure but I think I hear "he fell back"
> at 25:52-25:56: also here, 4 seconds is too long before the end disclaimer
oh and since you are reuploading anyway, please change the filename to only 1 digit (1 instead of 01) since we have less than 10 sections anyway.
New file length is 25:54
Corrections made from 23:10 forward to (oops) remove the cough and get rid of awkward silences. I agreed on "and he/she fell back" - it was a little slurred, so I grabbed a "sh" from another area and pasted it in - sounds much better.