Done, ready for Spot PL.Kitty wrote: ↑May 5th, 2020, 2:17 amaww it's a beautiful little romantic story. and I agree, we all play it so much in character, it's a delight to listen to.
I can picture us all standing behind a screen, lending our voices to small wooden puppets on strings. Sweet.
Excellent editing job again, Todd. I only have two suggestions for corrections:
> at 0:32: Columbine, wife of Pierrot: the description is missing here. I remember I handed the edited file in later on, when I noticed, you must have copied from the original file. The full voice credit should be in the new file: viewtopic.php?p=1645837#p1645837
> at 17:48: (p. 102) "love is cured by love, he..." "what is it that he wishes you to do ?" – I would shorten the pause between those two sentences, as Columbine is really cut off by Polichinelle here
thanks
Sonia
(I had pictured Columbine stopping in her talk, trying to figure out how to say what was an uncomfortable topic for her. Your suggestion that she is cut off is a better thought.)
Thanks, Todd