julianpratley wrote: ↑April 29th, 2020, 4:35 am
Just one issue with chapter 1 Larry: you said “the Chinook Cinnamon Cub, by Allen Chaffee” instead of “Chinook the Cinnamon Cub, by Allen Chaffee”. I love your roaring
Ha! You mean the BC can't get the title right?
Well, I got it right the first time. And, I've corrected the file and it's Ready for Spot PL.
julianpratley wrote: ↑April 29th, 2020, 4:35 am
Just one issue with chapter 1 Larry: you said “the Chinook Cinnamon Cub, by Allen Chaffee” instead of “Chinook the Cinnamon Cub, by Allen Chaffee”. I love your roaring
Ha! You mean the BC can't get the title right?
Well, I got it right the first time. And, I've corrected the file and it's Ready for Spot PL.
I had to listen twice because I thought surely you must know what the right title is! It's ok now
“It is said that your life flashes before your eyes just before you die. That is true, it's called Life.”
― Terry Pratchett, The Last Continent
Chapter 5 is PL OK
Just two very small notes for the other chapters: at 4:30 in chapter 3 you say “and thought he sniffed about”, rather than “and though he sniffed about”. At 4:30 in chapter 4 there's a stumble on handle.
“It is said that your life flashes before your eyes just before you die. That is true, it's called Life.”
― Terry Pratchett, The Last Continent
Chapter 5 is PL OK
Just two very small notes for the other chapters: at 4:30 in chapter 3 you say “and thought he sniffed about”, rather than “and though he sniffed about”. At 4:30 in chapter 4 there's a stumble on handle.