Thank you, Sonia, great feedback, as always! All fixed! I meant to recheck "centre partout" with the dictionary, but forgotKitty wrote: ↑March 28th, 2020, 2:46 pm I have only two small comments, both may be optional:
> at 14:07 and at 33:39: (p. 55 and 60) "centre partout" - I imagine you want the correct pronunciation on French words as well. (if not, ignore this comment)You say "center pa-toi" which doesn't mean anything really. The last word should be read like the English "par-too" (stress on"too")
> at 27:28-27:31: (p. 59) between "будить ночную тьму" and "Соловей поетъ", the pause feels a bit too long for me, also there is an audible click again, maybe this can get shortened a bit
NOTE: the second "centre partout" is in fact at 32:39, not 33:39
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