COMPLETE [Ancient Greek] Κύρου παιδεία - icequeen

[Kazbek]

Section 6 PL notes:

(0.35) 1.1 written: λείπων; heard: λειπῶν
(10:57) 1.13 written: ἐσιώπα; heard: ἐσίωπα
(11:27) 1.14 written: βέλτιστα; heard: βέλτισται
(17:20) 1.20 written: πόλεις γε; heard: γε repeated
(20:32) 1.24 written: ἐσθίειν; heard: ἐσθιεῖν
(22:09) 1.27 written: ἐντειχίζειν; heard: ἀντειχίζειν
(22:39) 1.27 written: φανεῖ; heard: φάνει
(25:46) 1.30 written: ἐνθάδε; heard: ἐνθάνδε
(25:48) 1.30 written: γενομένης; heard: γενομής
(26:45) 1.31 written: περαίνεσθαι; heard: παρείνεσθαι
(28:56) 1.34 written: ἡμίσεις; heard: ἡμίσει
(33:30) 1.39 written: ἀφαιρεῖσθαι; heard: ἀφαιρεῖσθαις
(34:49) 1.41 written: Ἀρμενία; heard: Ἀρμένια
(35:33) 1.42 οὓς δεήσοι στρατεύεσθαι - it sounds like you may have been following the Perseus version here, where there's an incorrect period at the end of this phrase instead of the comma in the PDF. I think the sentence structure is still comprehensible in your reading, so I don't know if you'll want to keep it as is.
(38:18) 2.2 written: κατενόει; heard: κατανόει
(41:20) 2.6 written: παρηγγύα; heard: παρηγύα
(44:12) 2.11 written: ἐρυμνόν; heard ἐρυμνό
(53:57) 2.25 written: αἰεί; heard: αἰδὲ (another Perseus typo)
(57:43) 2.30 written: συμφέρον; heard: συμφερόν
(57:44) 2.30 written: τίθεσθαι; heard: τιθέσθαι

Cheers,
Michael

[bedwere]

Thank you, Michael. I (hopefully) took care of all your suggestions. Sec. 6 is ready for spot PL.

[Kazbek]

Section 6 is spot PL OK!

[bedwere]

Sec. 7 is ready for PL. Cheers!

[Kazbek]

Section 7 PL notes:

(0:33) 3.1 written: εἰπεῖν; heard: εἴπεν
(0:42) 3.2 written: ἤχθετο; heard: ῇχθετο
(3:32) 3.4 written: συναπέστειλε; heard: συναπέιστελε
(3:45) 3.5 written: κεχρηματισμένος; heard: χεχρηματισμένος
(6:47) 3.9 written: τὰ σώματα; heard: τὸ σώματα
(12:23) 3.17 written: ὄντες; heard: ὄντε
(14:56) 3.20 written: συγκαταινῇ; heard: συγχαταινῇ
(15:57) 3.22 written: ἐπεὶ δὲ τάχιστα διέβη τὰ ὅρια; heard: repeated
(16:13) 3.22 written: Ἀσσυρίας; heard: Ἀσσυρίαις
(18:20) 3.25 written: ἀπάτης; heard: ἀπατῆς
(18:26) 3.25 written: κατάσκοποι; heard: κατόσκοποι
(18:35) 3.25 written: πρόσω; heard: πρόσῳ
(20:51) 3.28 written: προφυλακὰς; heard: προφυλὰκας
(20:53) 3.23 written: ἑκάτεροι; heard: ἑκατέροι
(24:11) 3.34 written: ἐστεφανωμένος; heard: ἐσταφονωμένος
(24:19) 3.34 written: ἐστεφανωμένος; heard: ἐσταφονωμένος
(24:34) 3.34 written: μάντεις; heard: μάντες
(27:39) 3.40 written: ἐστεφανωμένους; heard: ἐσταφονωμένους
(28:36) 3.41 written: ποιοῖτε; heard: ποιεῖτε
(29:03) 3.42 written: ἀνακαλοῦντες; heard: ἀνακολοῦντες
(30:13) 3.44 written: ἔφυτε; heard: ὕφετε
(34:34) 3.50 written: παραίνεσις; heard; παρείνεσις
(36:52) 3.53 written: ἐγγένηται; heard: ἐγένηται
(37:53-39:22) 3.55-3.56 Background noise. It didn't bother me when I followed along with the text, but when I listened to the audio on its own later, I found it rather distracting. I don't know if you want to redo it.
(41:28) 3.59 written: ἀκούσαντες; heard: ἀκούσαντε
(42:44) 3.61 written: οἱ μὲν δὴ παρεδίδοσαν; heard: missing
(43:14) 4.62 written: ἀκούσαντες; heard: ἀκούσαντε
(44:20) 4.65 written: ἐνέκλιναν; heard: ἐδέκλιναν
(44:40) 4.66 written: τάφρου; heard: τάφρους

It sounds like there may be a little clipping happening from time to time, e.g., from 31' to 32' and 41' to 42', though frankly I'm not sure I can distinguish light clipping from a slight change in vocal quality. It's so subtle that it doesn't affect listening experience, but if it's due to clipping, you might want to keep an eye out for it in the future.

Cheers,
Michael

[bedwere]

Many thanks! Sec. 7 is now ready for spot PL. I'll keep on eye on clipping, although I couldn't find any. There was some problem with noise-canceling in the 37:53-39:22 interval.
My second mistake was actually at 1:42.


By the way, are you coming to the ΣΥΝΟΔΟΣ ΕΛΛΗΝΙΚΗ? I do hope and pray the virus menace goes away and we can have it. Some of my business meetings are being cancelled...

[Kazbek]

Section 7 is spot PL OK!

ΣΥΝΟΔΟΣ ΕΛΛΗΝΙΚΗ looks like a great event. It's not my cup of tea, but I certainly hope you can attend.

Michael

[bedwere]

Section 8 is ready for PL. Cheers!

[bedwere]

Section 9 is ready for PL. Cheers!

[Kazbek]

Section 8 PL notes:

(1:04) 1.2 written: ἐπαινῶ ὅσον; heard: ἐπαίνω ὅσο
(4:45) 1.6 written: καὶ ταῦτα μέν... εἴητε; heard: reapeated
(18:46) 2.3 written: φόβος δ᾽ ἐνείη; heard: stumble/repeat
(19:38) 2.4 written: ἡγήσοιντο: heard: ἡγήσοιτο
(20:30) 2.6 written: καταλήψοιντο; heard: καταλήψοιτο
(21:29) 2.8 written: ἐμπεδώσωσιν; heard: ἐμπεδήσωσιν
(21:33) 2.8 written: πιστοῖς; heard: πίστοις
(22:59) 2.10 written: εὐτυχῆ; heard; εὐθυχῆ
(25:15) 2.13 written: ἀναμενεῖς; heard: ἀναμένεις
(25:56) 2.13 written: ἔχειν ὡς οὐχ; heard: ἔχειν οὐχ
(35:22) 2.27 written: ἀπέπεμπεν; heard: ἀπέπεμπε
(37:41) 2.30 written: Ἑλλήσποντον; heard: Ἑλλήσποντο
(39:16) 2.33 written: ὅστις; heard: ὅστι
(39:44) 2.34 written: ἐνενόησεν; heard: ἐνενέοσεν
(39:55) 2.35 written: δυνατὸν; heard: bump
(41:08) 2.36 written: καθίζεσθαι; heard: καθίστεσθαι
(43:07) 2.38 written: τοῦτ᾽; heard: ταῦτ᾽
(45:38) 2.41 written: ποτὸν; heard: πὸτον
(46:42) 2.43 written: κέρδος; heard: κερδός
(46:57) 2.44 written: παράσχοι; heard: παρόσχοι

Cheers,
Michael

[bedwere]

Many thanks, Michael. I hope you are doing well. Sec. 8 is ready for spot PL.

[Kazbek]

Section 8 is spot PL OK!

I'm ok. Thanks, Bedwere. I hope you're doing well, too.

Cheers and stay safe,
Michael

[Kazbek]

Section 9 PL notes:

(2:45) 3.4 written: μέγιστα; heard: μεγίστα
(8:12) 3.13 written: διώκεσθαι; heard: διωκέσθαι
(19:22) 4.12 written: εὐνοϊκῶς; heard: εὐονϊκῶς
(19:30) 4.12 written: εὐεργέτην; heard: εὐεργετήν

Not many of them!

Cheers,
Michael

[bedwere]

Thanks! Well, the fact that it is a short section helps, but it does appear to be fewer errors! Sec. 9 is now ready for spot PL.
Cheers!

[Kazbek]

Hmm, only the first issue seems to be corrected. Also, the ID3 tags suddenly look like gibberish.

Michael