11:28: "in this respect agreeing with those described by Dr. Chaillu" should be "in this respect agreeing with those described by Du Chaillu"
17:00: "but they remember the Bushmen in complexion" should be "but they resemble the Bushmen in complexion"
45:04: The ending silence is too long. You should be aiming for 5 seconds, and you've got over 6.5.
Jordan
Alcohol and Maths don't mix. So never drink and derive.
33:05: 'The arthropoid apes' should be 'The anthropoid apes'
46:47: The ending silence is too short. You should be aiming for 5 seconds, and you've got less then 3.5
Jordan
Alcohol and Maths don't mix. So never drink and derive.
32:36: "conscience become the controlling force in human actions, let fall the whip" should be "conscience become the controlling force in human actions, and government let fall the whip"
Jordan
Alcohol and Maths don't mix. So never drink and derive.