[COMPLETE] Jaufry the Knight by JB Mary-Lafon-ans

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Post by Newgatenovelist » February 10th, 2020, 3:01 am

Chapters 7 and 8 are PL OK. I'll go check out the Lake District project!

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Post by Newgatenovelist » February 10th, 2020, 5:34 am

Section 10 is PL OK. A few notes, but it's nearly there!


Section 09

1.59-2.02, end third para p. 130, self-correction
…afford of happiness or case or ease.”

3.27-3.29, bottom half p. 131
…that Melyan’s saviour [heard savour] and the weary knight…

13.46-13.50, first para p. 139, repetition
…galloped full galloped full speed towards that fatal pond.


Section 11

MW: please change MW to say ‘Court’ (not Castle)

7.06-7.11, p. 156, repetition/different pronunciations
…(she was in fact the fairy of Gibel) (she was in fact the fairy of Gibel)…

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Post by eggs4ears » February 10th, 2020, 2:31 pm

Newgatenovelist wrote:
February 10th, 2020, 5:34 am
7.06-7.11, p. 156, repetition/different pronunciations
…(she was in fact the fairy of Gibel) (she was in fact the fairy of Gibel)…
I wasn't sure about this one, I thought 'gi-' as in 'giselle', not as in 'give'. I have never heard this and couldn't find guidance online, but as it is French...?

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Post by Newgatenovelist » February 11th, 2020, 6:20 am

Crikey, don't ask me about French pronunciation, mediaeval or modern! Take your pick, and we'll go with that.

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Post by eggs4ears » February 14th, 2020, 1:36 pm

Part 0, 2, 5, 6, 9, 11 corrected and uploaded. All done!

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Post by Newgatenovelist » February 15th, 2020, 2:03 pm

Sections 0, 2, 5, 6, 9 and 11 are spot PL OK. Jaufry and his indestructible armour can ride off to the catalogue!

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Post by annise » February 15th, 2020, 3:02 pm

Brakes off......
Thank you both - all done , let me know if something needs changing

This project is now complete. All files can be downloaded from the catalog page here:https://librivox.org/jaufry-the-knight-and-the-fair-brunissende-by-jean-bernard-mary-lafon/
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Thank you both. :clap: :clap:

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Post by eggs4ears » February 19th, 2020, 4:42 am

Thanks, Anne. Lovely cover once again! :9: :9: :9:

Sorry to be a nuisance, but one tiny change in the summary? In line two - 'sets of in pursuit' should be 'sets off in pursuit'.

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Post by annise » February 19th, 2020, 5:24 am

Glad you liked the cover it was a nice dragon and I was pleased it finished up looking as good as it did
2 f's added

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