And I prefer not doing it on projects. It's more numbers to confuse the eyes when double checking the run times vs. what shows up at Archive during cataloging.
very strange!!!
Because I've done it FOR _EVER...and only because...and some point....I was told to.
I've taken all the initial "00's" OUT!!!
-j
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40 Along about 3:10, you slip out of John Bangs' character for awhile, then back in, then out. No errors and no big deal, you just sound like you sometimes.
Great character voices. Mr. Putnam sounds like a donkey in an animated cartoon. Hee Haw! Brilliant!
41 ok
42 ok
43 ok
44 ok
45 ok, tricky how the writer writes like Twain, but isn't Twain. You did a good job splitting the difference!
47 ok
49 ok
leaving 48 and 50 til tomorrow, also spot PLing of a few others. Gotta do other stuff now.
40 Along about 3:10, you slip out of John Bangs' character for a while, then back in, then out. No errors and no big deal, you just sound like you sometimes.
Great character voices. Mr. Putnam sounds like a donkey in an animated cartoon. Hee Haw! Brilliant!
25
3:10 due to the rest, to is missing
The pace of Mark's long part, as elsewhere discussed, I find painfully slow. Could use a tempo boost, as elsewhere applied.
32
:23 a Socialistic club, you say Socialist
3:20 missing phrase: just this mission. I shall /only attempt a few changes. I would /merely compress
5:26 the separable verb, you say separate, elsewhere you do say separable
msfry wrote: ↑January 26th, 2020, 10:56 am
Here's the last batch of PL Notes.
25
3:10 due to the rest, to is missing
The pace of Mark's long part, as elsewhere discussed, I find painfully slow. Could use a tempo boost, as elsewhere applied.
32
:23 a Socialistic club, you say Socialist
3:20 missing phrase: just this mission. I shall /only attempt a few changes. I would /merely compress
5:26 the separable verb, you say separate, elsewhere you do say separable
34 ok 46 ok
48
1:00 British metropolis, you say English
50 ok
OK!!
I've shortened and corrected 25
corrected 32 and 48
and sent in the zipped text file for Part 3
Okay, John, looks like you're PL OK everywhere. Glad I got to be a small part of this unique project, (if only with 5 minutes to spare in volunteering as DPL! )
I'll submit the cover shortly after it catalogues.
msfry wrote: ↑January 26th, 2020, 1:10 pm
Okay, John, looks like you're PL OK everywhere. Glad I got to be a small part of this unique project, (if only with 5 minutes to spare in volunteering as DPL! )
I'll submit the cover shortly after it catalogs.
Ta Ta and best wishes!
Michele!!
Thanks again for your invaluable oversight!!
I really appreciate ALL you've done and suggested!!
And
I will definitely keep you in the loop as each part approaches its finish line.