[COMPLETE][HISTORY/GEOGRAPHY]World's Story 9: England - kit

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » January 16th, 2020, 9:00 am

Sorry, I meant to give you that: "not him thy Harry's company" should be repeated, unless that is an error. He seems to have jumped down to the next line too soon. Jim

Post by **Kitty** » January 16th, 2020, 9:11 am

neecheelok70 wrote: ↑January 16th, 2020, 9:00 amSorry, I meant to give you that: "not him thy Harry's company" is missing. He seems to have jumped down to the next line too soon. Jim

oh now I see, the line "banish not him thy Harry's company" is repeated here and he only said it once. I guess we both overlooked this repetition. I checked with another archive scan and indeed it seems to be repeated in every edition.

Alan, would you mind giving me one more version of this line ? I could simply copy/paste this one, but maybe Falstaff is being more insistent and expressive in his repetition, maybe you want to intonate it differently. Just let me know.

And thanks Jim for your eagle eyes ! It really skipped my scrutiny in both PL jobs.

Sonia

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » January 16th, 2020, 9:55 am

Glad I could help, of course. What I continue to believe is the sound (timber) of my voice doesn't fit with the other voices. Maybe I can manipulate it with some of the options from Effects. Jim

Post by **Kitty** » January 16th, 2020, 10:06 am

neecheelok70 wrote: ↑January 16th, 2020, 9:55 amWhat I continue to believe is the sound (timber) of my voice doesn't fit with the other voices. Maybe I can manipulate it with some of the options from Effects.

hmm I don't know, I really never used effects, unless I want to make a ghostly voice in drama

I am not a big fan of enhancing sound. I could ask JayS who is a good sound expert, maybe he knows a trick or two to enhance it. I'll write him a PM and copy you into it.

That said, I don't think it sounds too off.

Sonia

thestorygirl · Post by **thestorygirl** » January 18th, 2020, 12:48 pm

IN!:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory_volume09_37_tappan_128kb.mp3
(25:38)

Post by **Kitty** » January 18th, 2020, 12:52 pm

thestorygirl wrote: ↑January 18th, 2020, 12:48 pm IN!:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory_volume09_37_tappan_128kb.mp3
(25:38)

wohoooo !!! thank you so much. I will try to PL tomorrow, but it's a long section, it may have to wait till Monday, we'll see.

Sonia

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » January 19th, 2020, 9:34 am

Kitty wrote: ↑January 16th, 2020, 9:11 am
neecheelok70 wrote: ↑January 16th, 2020, 9:00 amSorry, I meant to give you that: "not him thy Harry's company" is missing. He seems to have jumped down to the next line too soon. Jim
oh now I see, the line "banish not him thy Harry's company" is repeated here and he only said it once. I guess we both overlooked this repetition. I checked with another archive scan and indeed it seems to be repeated in every edition.

Alan, would you mind giving me one more version of this line ? I could simply copy/paste this one, but maybe Falstaff is being more insistent and expressive in his repetition, maybe you want to intonate it differently. Just let me know.

And thanks Jim for your eagle eyes ! It really skipped my scrutiny in both PL jobs.

Sonia

Hi Sonia

I have just checked the file I uploaded for Falstaff and the "banish not him" line is there twice (either side of 8:20).
Do you still have my uploaded file or shall I upload it again

Post by **Kitty** » January 19th, 2020, 10:59 am

alanmapstone wrote: ↑January 19th, 2020, 9:34 amI have just checked the file I uploaded for Falstaff and the "banish not him" line is there twice (either side of 8:20).

now I am so ashamed, that I did not even think that the error could lie with my editing. I must have overlooked it in your file because it was the same sentence. (this is a lesson in humility again). You are right, I found it now (thanks for the timestamp). And I inserted the second version into the right spot.

Jim this is ready for spot PL. At 10:03 and following, there should be two "banish not him" lines.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory_volume09_54_tappan_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 18:38 min.

Also since we are nearing completion, and I didn't hear back from new reader DanielHurt, I checked his PL notes once again and noticed, I can easily correct all the spots myself. So as not to waste and otherwise good recording, I uploaded the corrected file now, if you could Spot PL that one as well. Here are the PL notes, as a reminder:
viewtopic.php?p=1643380#p1643380

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory_volume09_58_tappan_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 14:30 min.

thank you

Sonia

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » January 19th, 2020, 11:24 am

Sections 54 and 58 are now PL OK! I even ran 58 through Checker. Jim

Post by **Kitty** » January 19th, 2020, 11:28 am

neecheelok70 wrote: ↑January 19th, 2020, 11:24 am Sections 54 and 58 are now PL OK! I even ran 58 through Checker. Jim

super, thank you Jim !!!

Only one section left

Sonia

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » January 19th, 2020, 12:35 pm

Alleluia!

Post by **Kitty** » January 20th, 2020, 4:08 am

thestorygirl wrote: ↑January 18th, 2020, 12:48 pmIN!:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory_volume09_37_tappan_128kb.mp3
(25:38)

I am so sorry that you have recorded the wrong section. Following our PM communication, I will release the claim again. Jim in fact has volunteered to take on any remaining sections, so at least it is adopted straight away.

Thank you Jim !

And thanks storygirl, nevertheless. It was an unfortunate mishap.

Sonia

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » January 20th, 2020, 4:11 am

Yes, I would like to claim Section 37. Jim

Post by **Kitty** » January 20th, 2020, 4:12 am

neecheelok70 wrote: ↑January 20th, 2020, 4:11 amYes, I would like to claim Section 37. Jim

thanks again. And no stress. I'll be patient.

Sonia

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » January 20th, 2020, 8:28 am

Here is Section 37--I liked it! Jim

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory_volume09_37_tappan_128kb.mp3

26:32