COMPLETE[PLAY]Heautontimorumenos; the Self-Tormentor by Terence - thw

[Kitty]

OK, I didn't know the translator was needed at the end as well. Added now anyway, and re-uploaded:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heautontimorumenos_narrator_5_128kb.mp3

thank you, yes, now PL ok

you probably never have to say heautontimorumenos in your life again it's not the sort of vocabulary that commonly crops up in discussions but you never know when one might need it

Sonia

[silverquill]

Here is Syrus Act 1:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heautontimorumenos_syrus_2_128kb.mp3

[ToddHW]

Here is Syrus Act 1:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heautontimorumenos_syrus_2_128kb.mp3

Act 2, you mean....

Thanks, Todd

[Kitty]

Here is Syrus Act 1:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heautontimorumenos_syrus_2_128kb.mp3

yes great job, Larry I am not sure yet whether Syrus is a totally positive character or more a nasty schemer. And you keep it nicely ambiguous too, I like that. We'll see how he turns out.

I only found one small thing to correct:

> at 8:14: "But hark you, take care, will you, not to be imprudently impetuous." - you say "will you not, to be" but it is "will you, not to be", which is exactly the opposite. You need to make the break at the correct comma placing

thanks

Sonia

[silverquill]

Here is Syrus Act 1:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heautontimorumenos_syrus_2_128kb.mp3

yes great job, Larry I am not sure yet whether Syrus is a totally positive character or more a nasty schemer. And you keep it nicely ambiguous too, I like that. We'll see how he turns out.

I only found one small thing to correct:

> at 8:14: "But hark you, take care, will you, not to be imprudently impetuous." - you say "will you not, to be" but it is "will you, not to be", which is exactly the opposite. You need to make the break at the correct comma placing

thanks

Sonia

Aaah. We'll, I had to go over this several times to make sense of it. Somehow wasn't registering with me. Maybe the little grey cells were just worn out. But, i think I've got it right now. Very excellent to spot this. So, let's try this:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heautontimorumenos_syrus_2_128kb.mp3

I have the rest of the acts recorded, so it's "just" a matter of editing them now.

[Kitty]

Aaah. We'll, I had to go over this several times to make sense of it. Somehow wasn't registering with me. Maybe the little grey cells were just worn out. But, i think I've got it right now. Very excellent to spot this.

well, spotting such things is what makes gives the DPL job a meaning

And you got it perfectly right this time. PL ok now. Thank you, Larry !

Sonia

[silverquill]

Here are Acts 3, 4 and 5 of Syrus -- money, money, money

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heautontimorumenos_syrus_3_128kb.mp3 7:23
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heautontimorumenos_syrus_4_128kb.mp3 12:51
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heautontimorumenos_syrus_5_128kb.mp3 3:37

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[Kitty]

Here are Acts 3, 4 and 5 of Syrus -- money, money, money

excellent, Larry. Great job here with this little schemer, who in the end doesn't seem to have the upper hand after all

Acts 3 and 4 are already PL ok.

One small note left for Act 5:

> at 0:26: "that that in which I have offended" – you say "I have been offended", which is the opposite

thanks

Sonia

[silverquill]

One small note left for Act 5:

> at 0:26: "that that in which I have offended" – you say "I have been offended", which is the opposite

thanks

Sonia

Did a clip, but if you think it needs a new recording, just let me know.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heautontimorumenos_syrus_5_128kb.mp3

[Kitty]

Did a clip, but if you think it needs a new recording, just let me know.

it sounds alright and is understandable we can leave it like that. Thanks, it's PL ok then

Sonia

[ToddHW]

I have assembled the five acts except for the two missing roles.

Thanks, Todd

[WiltedScribe]

Would like to request a short extension, please!

[ToddHW]

Okay.

Thanks, Todd

[benderca]

Antiphila, Act 2:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heautontimorumenos_antiphila_2_128kb.mp3

(short and sweet ).