[COMPLETE]Love Stories Volume 2 -pc

williamjones · Post by **williamjones** » November 10th, 2019, 2:07 pm

Mark, sure I'll take a shot at PLing your story... If Michele approves.
As for your variation on the joke: Забавно!

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » November 10th, 2019, 2:10 pm

Uploaded:
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/lovestories2_grievingbride_sologub_mc_128kb.mp3 [50:36]
Опечаленная невеста (Grieving Bride)
Фёдор Сологуб (Fyodor Sologub) 1863-1927
Source: https://imwerden.de/pdf/sologub_sochinenija_tom7_1911.pdf page 19.

A unique love story between two who never met...
Thank you, Bill!

williamjones · Post by **williamjones** » November 10th, 2019, 8:50 pm

Mark.... an HOUR long?!?!?!?!? Not 10 minutes?
Я не давно не изучал русский язык.
Это будет сложно, но я сделаю это завтра.

msfry · Post by **msfry** » November 10th, 2019, 9:29 pm

Mark and Bill, LV allows up to 70 minutes for one file, so an hour long story is perfectly acceptable.

roaringlionfish · November 10th, 2019, 11:16 pm

New Submission for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/lovestories2_herlover_gorky_rlf_128kb.mp3 - 11:29
Her Lover
Maxim Gorky (1868 – 1936)
http://www.gutenberg.org/files/13437/13437-h/13437-h.htm#link2H_4_0020

Thanks!

msfry · Post by **msfry** » November 11th, 2019, 2:50 pm

Horner94 wrote: ↑November 6th, 2019, 7:51 pm I also just wanted to let you know that I have added another recording to this collection (On Love by Kalil Gibran), above, just in case you overlooked it.
Kind regards,
Chad

I've combed through the pages and don't see a post re On Love. Could you please post it again?

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » November 11th, 2019, 3:03 pm

williamjones wrote: ↑November 10th, 2019, 8:50 pm Mark.... an HOUR long?!?!?!?!? Not 10 minutes?
Я не давно не изучал русский язык.
Это будет сложно, но я сделаю это завтра.

Thank you, Bill, no rush and no pressure.
Isn't 10 min a bit too quick for true love though?

But seriously, if you find it too difficult, feel free to say no!
Thanks again!

msfry · Post by **msfry** » November 11th, 2019, 3:05 pm

Love and Lovers is PL OK. What an adorable story, Nesli. I feel so happy now.

How about another?

msfry · Post by **msfry** » November 11th, 2019, 3:16 pm

The Knowledge of Christ's Love is PL OK, except that the volume checks out at 86.1. Please increase volume +3 or +4 to 89 or 90, upload using the same file name, and let me know when this is done.

msfry · Post by **msfry** » November 11th, 2019, 4:13 pm

PL Notes Her Lover

Thank you for your submission, roaringlionfish, and welcome to Librivox.
Your story is interesting. Your voice is resonant and pleasant, your enthusiasm refreshing. I hope you contribute a lot to Librivox.

On this story, I will cite a few things that should be corrected, then make a general comment about your delivery.

6:23 plainly the poor wench, you say wrench
10:28 through the mist, you say midst

I did not time stamp any instances, but you talk so fast at times that some of your syllables get swallowed. For instance:
Did not understand comes out dina uner stan; For herself comes out ferself; pensively comes out pensely. This is not uncommon and easily avoided by reading a bit more slowly and deliberately. You can always use the Tempo effect later to regulate the speed of a phrase or segment, or a whole file.

If you need help editing, there are plenty of tutorials on the Librivox wiki (see menu above).

msfry · Post by **msfry** » November 11th, 2019, 4:19 pm

msfry wrote: ↑November 5th, 2019, 10:48 pm PL Notes for When One Loves

My only note pertains to the file name. Please reload taking the underscores out of the title: _when_one_loves_, should be _whenoneloves_

All else PL OK. Thank you.

Have you submitted the file with the corrected file name? I'm playing catch up this evening and can't find a post to that effect.

Nesli · Post by **Nesli** » November 12th, 2019, 1:51 am

msfry wrote: ↑November 11th, 2019, 3:05 pm Love and Lovers is PL OK. What an adorable story, Nesli. I feel so happy now.
How about another?

I was planning to read another story.
But I have a terrible flu and the voice of an aged baritone

(Can actually do a story with a first person old male narrator

if I can get my energy together)
Nesli

williamjones · Post by **williamjones** » November 12th, 2019, 2:42 pm

Have re-uploaded when love o. henry

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/lovestories2_whenoneloves_henry_wj_128kb.mp3

no time change

msfry · Post by **msfry** » November 12th, 2019, 3:33 pm

williamjones wrote: ↑November 12th, 2019, 2:42 pm Have re-uploaded when love o. henry

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/lovestories2_whenoneloves_henry_wj_128kb.mp3

no time change

Thanks, Bill.
Checking against the text again to make sure it's the right file, I notice another anomaly. There is no story named "When One Loves" in this collection. The story begins:

A SERVICE OF LOVE

When one loves one's Art no service seems too hard.

Thus, you need to redo the Intro and Outro reciting the correct story title, and rename the file _serviceoflove_

P.S. When One Loves One's Art does seem a more fitting title, but we have to go with the author's choice.

williamjones · Post by **williamjones** » November 12th, 2019, 7:38 pm

A Service of Love by O. Henry uploaded still another time with Intro and Outro reflecting the correct name of the selection "A Service of Love".

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/lovestories2_serviceoflove_henry_wj_128kb.mp3 16:14