[COMPLETE]The Sleuth of St. James Square-ans

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annise wrote: August 3rd, 2019, 3:02 pm Thanks both for the help. DPL added

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KevinS wrote: August 5th, 2019, 11:48 am Chapter 3

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Well done. There is just one edit that needs to be made though. At about :58-:59 You've left out a short phrase.Starting with The three of us had been carried along in it with no sense of time; my sister, the ancient Major Carrington and I. You left out the ancient Major Carrignton and I. I think we need to hear that to know who is speaking in the following paragraph. It actually sounds like maybe it was there and got edited out?

Anyway, I really enjoyed the story and your reading of it. :clap:
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aniroo wrote: August 5th, 2019, 1:34 pm
KevinS wrote: August 5th, 2019, 11:48 am Chapter 3

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/sleuthstjamessquare_03_post_128kb.mp3

34:28
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Well done. There is just one edit that needs to be made though. At about :58-:59 You've left out a short phrase.Starting with The three of us had been carried along in it with no sense of time; my sister, the ancient Major Carrington and I. You left out the ancient Major Carrignton and I. I think we need to hear that to know who is speaking in the following paragraph. It actually sounds like maybe it was there and got edited out?

Anyway, I really enjoyed the story and your reading of it. :clap:
Thank you. I'll fix it now!
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Fixed, I hope!

You know, at the end of this story I told myself, "Ah, Kevin, you should have known!"
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KevinS wrote: August 5th, 2019, 2:17 pm Fixed, I hope!

You know, at the end of this story I told myself, "Ah, Kevin, you should have known!"
Section 3 PL OK.

I guessed that at the end of the story the lady would be the robber, but not that she wasn't the countess or lady, or whatever. :lol:
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SEction 15 PL OK :thumbs: :thumbs:

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aniroo wrote: August 31st, 2019, 6:48 am


SEction 15 PL OK :thumbs: :thumbs:

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Thank you! That story wasn't quite as exciting, was it?
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KevinS wrote: August 31st, 2019, 7:01 am
aniroo wrote: August 31st, 2019, 6:48 am


SEction 15 PL OK :thumbs: :thumbs:

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Thank you! That story wasn't quite as exciting, was it?
I wasn't gonna say anything, but yeah,not too exciting.
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KevinS wrote: September 14th, 2019, 3:16 pm Section 14

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30:20

(I kinda like this one.)

Section 14 PL OK :thumbs:

That was an unexpected ending! :)

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aniroo wrote: September 15th, 2019, 10:49 am
KevinS wrote: September 14th, 2019, 3:16 pm Section 14

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30:20

(I kinda like this one.)

Section 14 PL OK :thumbs:

That was an unexpected ending! :)

Thanks,
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I didn't see it coming!
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KevinS wrote: October 19th, 2019, 6:01 pm Section 16

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31:45

Not a bad story, this one!
Section 16 PL OK :thumbs: :thumbs:

Well read ! :D

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