COMPLETE[PLAY]The Tender Husband by Steele - thw

Pinklady77 · Post by **Pinklady77** » September 9th, 2019, 8:32 am

Hello,

Here is Jenny from Act 3, duration: 0:46
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusbans_jenny_3_128kb.mp3

Lola Janie

Post by **Kitty** » September 9th, 2019, 9:37 am

Pinklady77 wrote: ↑September 9th, 2019, 8:32 am Here is Jenny from Act 3, duration: 0:46
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusbans_jenny_3_128kb.mp3

thank you, Lola, for the quick turn-around and I really like your portrayal of the maid. Love the accent too, the tinge of cockney gives her a bit of a "lower-class" vibe which is perfect here.

All the lines are in and perfectly delivered, I only have one PL note to add:

> at 0:01: for the voice credit, please always use the whole description of the character, you can see it in full in the MW. Here: "Jenny, maid to Mrs. Clerimont, read by Lola Janie"

> also, since you have to reupload anyway, maybe a round of noise-cleaning wouldn't be amiss, as the background noise is really very loud

do you use Audacity ? It's really easy to clean with that program, I can walk you through it if you need help

Thank you

Sonia

Pinklady77 · Post by **Pinklady77** » September 9th, 2019, 11:10 am

Kitty wrote: ↑September 9th, 2019, 9:37 am
Pinklady77 wrote: ↑September 9th, 2019, 8:32 am Here is Jenny from Act 3, duration: 0:46
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusbans_jenny_3_128kb.mp3
thank you, Lola, for the quick turn-around and I really like your portrayal of the maid. Love the accent too, the tinge of cockney gives her a bit of a "lower-class" vibe which is perfect here.

All the lines are in and perfectly delivered, I only have one PL note to add:

> at 0:01: for the voice credit, please always use the whole description of the character, you can see it in full in the MW. Here: "Jenny, maid to Mrs. Clerimont, read by Lola Janie"

> also, since you have to reupload anyway, maybe a round of noise-cleaning wouldn't be amiss, as the background noise is really very loud do you use Audacity ? It's really easy to clean with that program, I can walk you through it if you need help

Thank you

Sonia

Hi Sonia,

I think I forgot to noise clean, my apologies. That has been done and I made the correction to the character name in the beginning as noted above.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusbans_jenny_3_128kb.mp3

Thank you

Post by **Kitty** » September 10th, 2019, 4:26 am

Pinklady77 wrote: ↑September 9th, 2019, 11:10 am I think I forgot to noise clean, my apologies. That has been done and I made the correction to the character name in the beginning as noted above.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusbans_jenny_3_128kb.mp3

did you maybe forget to upload the file (or upload the previous file again ?) Because the noise is still the same and the voice credit still wrong. Could you try reuploading once more maybe ? An idea would be to call the file differently (maybe correct the typo "husband" instead of "husbans") so we can be sure it's the new file you're uploading.

Thank you

Sonia

Pinklady77 · Post by **Pinklady77** » September 10th, 2019, 7:43 am

Here is the corrected file for Jenny the Maid.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusband_jenny_3_128kb.mp3

Lola J

Post by **Kitty** » September 10th, 2019, 7:57 am

Pinklady77 wrote: ↑September 10th, 2019, 7:43 am Here is the corrected file for Jenny the Maid.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusband_jenny_3_128kb.mp3

thank you, yes now it's all correct and PL ok. Don't know what happened with the other file. But all is good now. Thanks !

Sonia

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » September 17th, 2019, 9:58 am

Well, for some reason I thought I had done this one, but obviously I was wrong.
So, apologies for getting it in late.

Such a skinflint -- it's all about the money . . . .

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusband_tipkin_1_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusband_tipkin_5_128kb.mp3

Post by **ToddHW** » September 17th, 2019, 10:17 am

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **Kitty** » September 18th, 2019, 1:26 am

silverquill wrote: ↑September 17th, 2019, 9:58 amSuch a skinflint -- it's all about the money . . . .

indeed, this guy is quite the money-bag hunter. I loved the final scene where he gets insulted with all kinds of names.

Excellent job, Larry, and totally PL ok. Thank you so much !

Only Captain Clerimont left and then it's a wrap

Sonia

ssfellows · Post by **ssfellows** » September 25th, 2019, 6:23 am

Hi All,

Well, Sonia has sold me on another role! I will be glad to read the part of Capt. Clerimont.

Regards,
Steve

Post by **Kitty** » September 25th, 2019, 6:27 am

ssfellows wrote: ↑September 25th, 2019, 6:23 amWell, Sonia has sold me on another role! I will be glad to read the part of Capt. Clerimont.

I think you'll be great in that role. Sooo looking forward to hearing your interpretation. And you know you will have all our gratitude to help put this baby in the catalogue.

Thanks Steve !

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » September 25th, 2019, 1:18 pm

Ah, so our Kitty has caught us another one, eh? Great. You'll be hooked and hopelessly addicted shortly.

Welcome, Todd

Post by **Kitty** » September 26th, 2019, 2:05 am

ToddHW wrote: ↑September 25th, 2019, 1:18 pmAh, so our Kitty has caught us another one, eh? Great. You'll be hooked and hopelessly addicted shortly.

to be fair, I made Steve aware of the addiction risk beforehand, so he knows what he is in for.

Sonia

ssfellows · Post by **ssfellows** » September 27th, 2019, 7:09 pm

Kitty wrote: ↑September 26th, 2019, 2:05 am to be fair, I made Steve aware of the addiction risk beforehand, so he knows what he is in for.

True, I can't claim ignorance, for better or worse!

Act 1 of Capt. Clerimont is ready for review: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusband_captclerimont_01_128kb.mp3

Regards,
Steve

Post by **Kitty** » September 28th, 2019, 2:01 am

ssfellows wrote: ↑September 27th, 2019, 7:09 pm Act 1 of Capt. Clerimont is ready for review: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusband_captclerimont_01_128kb.mp3

yay !!! thank you for this fast turn-around, Steve

And the first act is already very promising. Excellently acted out, especially the love-pining moment. Even though, I start to think he is more in love with the jewellery than the girl

But at least he can play a convincing romantic, our good captain

This is totally PL ok. And that means Act 1 is ready to be finalized.

Can't wait to hear this all assembled.

Looking forward to the rest.

Sonia