but very lively narrated, I loved the direct speeches you made. You would be good in dramatic performances 
Yes you read quite fast, but I was able to follow along. I know that the Italians have a faster way of speaking, so I was expecting it. 
But you leave pauses in between so I was able to gather my thoughts.Speaking of pauses though, I need to make a note. In the first three minutes your breaks in between sentences are way too long. As a listener, anything over 2 seconds feels like the action is not happening fast enough
Usually I recommend 1 or maximum 1.5 seconds between normal sentences, maybe a bit more between paragraphs, but nothing exceeding 2 seconds. I marked down the time stamps where I think the silence is too long for comfort. Could you cut down to 1-1.5 maximum in these places ? Luckily after the first minutes your silences were much better and I had nothing to note down there anymore. 
Also there are a few small errors that need correcting. Now please, I always say this for new readers: do NOT re-record it all again ! Only do a spot editing in those places where the error is. The best way is recording the sentence or part of the sentence again in another audacity window, then cleaning it, and copying it into the place where the error was in your end recording. Maybe adjust the volume so it sounds a bit similar to the rest of the sentence. If you re-record it all, it is first of all too much work for you, and second too much work for me because I have to re-listen to it all again, instead of only the few sentences where the errors were. Also the risk that there are new errors in the new recording are very high too
Ok now here are the places which need correcting, it's actually not as much as it looks like, most of it is cutting silence, there are only 4 sentences with errors that need to be re-recorded. I suggest you start at the END, so that the time stamps stay correct. If you start cutting the silence from the beginning, all my times will be wrong and you will have a hard time finding the place I mean
> at the beginning, we recommend only 0.5 to maximum 1 second of silence, you have over 2 here. It's a bit long to wait for the recording to start
> at 0:02: the title of the story is not "Novelle napolitane" but "Gli ubriachi", you have to say that at the beginning
> at 0:19-0:23: between disclaimer and title: shorten silence
> at 0:24-0:27: between title and start of story: shorten silence. In fact, here is a loud click, you can easily remove that one in the process, so it sounds clearer
> at 0:54-0:56: after "il conto a memoria": shorten silence and remove the click
> at 1:46-1:49: after "al taglio della tavola": shorten silence
> at 2:07-2:10: after "forza nelle dita": shorten silence
> at 2:33-2:35: after "il mucchietto de' soldi": shorten silence and a click can be removed
> at 2:38-2:41: after "volgendosi attorno": shorten silence
> at 2:46-2:49: after "il denaro addosso": shorten silence
> at 5:42: "me ne vado solo e buonanotte" - the end of buonanotte is cut off
> at 6:00: "chiamò il cocchiere" - you say "esclamo", which is not really a change of meaning, so it's an optional change, but usually we should only read what the author wrote. But here it's not word perfect required, I just mentioned it, in case you want to have it word perfect
> at 8:54: "Vi siete offeso?..." - this sentence should be repeated, you onla have it once. I guess you cut it out by error
> at 16:01: "End of Gli ubriachi" - you again said "Novelle Napolitane"
> at 16:08: at the end we leave a standard of 5 seconds of silence. You have over 16 here
you can cut those out, only leave 5 secondsIt was really a very good start, Alejandra.
It's almost word-perfect reading and if you remove all the long silences, really, you did not make many mistakes. Very good job.Since you reupload anyway, please also remember to use the correct filename this time: msw022_ubriachi_giacomo_atc_128kb
If you still have questions for editing, please ask ! It's not too difficult and you'll get better with each editing, I can promise you that.
thank you
Sonia
the first time I listened to Ancient Greek.