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Chapter 4 is up, I'm starting to think May is the only good guy!
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Had to get another one up this weekend, so 5 is also up. Starting to get into the thick of things!
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6 is up, I think somebody's mouth is going to get them in trouble (have no idea who though).
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Chapter 4 is PL OK for sure. Well Done! I loved the narration so much.lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑August 11th, 2019, 12:05 pm Chapter 4 is up, I'm starting to think May is the only good guy!
May Thurston, I agree with you.
Sorry for being late with the PL. I'll keep listening to the rest.
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Constructive criticism is always welcome.
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Thanks, and take your time!SaraHale wrote: ↑August 17th, 2019, 12:18 pmChapter 4 is PL OK for sure. Well Done! I loved the narration so much.lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑August 11th, 2019, 12:05 pm Chapter 4 is up, I'm starting to think May is the only good guy!
May Thurston, I agree with you.
Sorry for being late with the PL. I'll keep listening to the rest.
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Love the narration for this one as well.lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑August 11th, 2019, 1:48 pm Had to get another one up this weekend, so 5 is also up. Starting to get into the thick of things!
Minor PL Notes:
- @02m:41.252s - but this was patently impossible. I hear patiently instead of patently.
- @12m:41.625s - astonishing dissonance from Strauss. I hear distance instead of dissonance.
- @16m:56.644s - You've missed the bolded part. "vast, massive, dignified. Now, the genius was gone from the reading. Saxe Temple felt no least degree of sympathy for this crude, unpleasant fragment. On the contrary, the piece"
Rambling a bit, feel free to ignore
Maybe I'm influenced by Detective Conan (it's a Japanese anime). Which I won't recommend because it's an on-going anime since 1996. There was a case in Detective Conan where someone used a music sheet to pass a coded message. They also used Moonlight Sonata by Beethoven. Have you by any chance come across this video (https://youtu.be/yGDCd5LMEmw)? It's a MOONLIGHT SONATA REMIX. I love it when the old, new, and creativity are mixed together.
Now for the next chapter...
Thanks, SaraHale.
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Constructive criticism is always welcome.
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Thanks, will try to fix this afternoon.
Right? And the emphasis on how Saxe is also a musician. Sometimes these people aren't the smartest... watch us be wrong though.
Wow, that's an awesome video. Super cool.
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Okay!lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑August 17th, 2019, 1:27 pm Thanks, will try to fix this afternoon.
Right? And the emphasis on how Saxe is also a musician. Sometimes these people aren't the smartest... watch us be wrong though.
Totally!! I'm afraid that we might get it wrong. We'll see.
I'm so glad you liked it.
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Chapter 6 is PL OKlymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑August 17th, 2019, 10:59 am 6 is up, I think somebody's mouth is going to get them in trouble (have no idea who though).
Thanks, SaraHale.
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Hopefully corrected these. And, if we are wrong about this, then nothing happens and we can laugh at ourselves for thinking we're smarter than the characters.SaraHale wrote: ↑August 17th, 2019, 1:22 pmLove the narration for this one as well.lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑August 11th, 2019, 1:48 pm Had to get another one up this weekend, so 5 is also up. Starting to get into the thick of things!
Minor PL Notes:
- @02m:41.252s - but this was patently impossible. I hear patiently instead of patently.
- @12m:41.625s - astonishing dissonance from Strauss. I hear distance instead of dissonance.
When will they figure out that the clue is in the ghastly music sheet?? I'm not sure if I'm right. But I guessed that that's the clue from May's reaction and what she said.
- @16m:56.644s - You've missed the bolded part. "vast, massive, dignified. Now, the genius was gone from the reading. Saxe Temple felt no least degree of sympathy for this crude, unpleasant fragment. On the contrary, the piece"
Rambling a bit, feel free to ignore
Maybe I'm influenced by Detective Conan (it's a Japanese anime). Which I won't recommend because it's an on-going anime since 1996. There was a case in Detective Conan where someone used a music sheet to pass a coded message. They also used Moonlight Sonata by Beethoven. Have you by any chance come across this video (https://youtu.be/yGDCd5LMEmw)? It's a MOONLIGHT SONATA REMIX. I love it when the old, new, and creativity are mixed together.
Now for the next chapter...
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7 is up. Masters is going to get into trouble I think...
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Chapter 5 is PL OK. Well edited.lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑August 17th, 2019, 3:27 pm Hopefully corrected these. And, if we are wrong about this, then nothing happens and we can laugh at ourselves for thinking we're smarter than the characters.
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
I think so too...lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑August 18th, 2019, 1:26 pm 7 is up. Masters is going to get into trouble I think...
One minor PL note:
- @00m:11.481s - Haphazard (https://howjsay.com/search?word=HAPHAZARD). I hear it half hazard. So, could you please double-check this one?
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And to think I've thought it was pronounced half hazard my entire life... good catch! Better?SaraHale wrote: ↑August 21st, 2019, 2:01 am @00m:11.481s - Haphazard (https://howjsay.com/search?word=HAPHAZARD). I hear it half hazard. So, could you please double-check this one?
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It's perfect!!! Chapter 7 is now PL OK.lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑August 22nd, 2019, 4:20 pm And to think I've thought it was pronounced half hazard my entire life... good catch! Better?
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.