[Christianity] Love Slaves, SL Brengle - dlo
Thanks Patty! Chapter 15 is yours!
Fiction: Regiment of Women
Non-Fiction: History Philosophy English Literature Hellenic History
FULL: Gondoliers W&D Sherlock Holmes PSmith Dr Dolittle French Revolution
Non-Fiction: History Philosophy English Literature Hellenic History
FULL: Gondoliers W&D Sherlock Holmes PSmith Dr Dolittle French Revolution
Here's Section 12 at 13:06
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/loveslaves_12_brengle_128kb.mp3
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Bruce.
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/loveslaves_12_brengle_128kb.mp3
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Bruce.
And I would like to claim sections 7 and 8.
Thanks,
Bruce.
Thanks,
Bruce.
May I claim Section 3?
Kind regards,
Chad
Kind regards,
Chad
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Section 12 is PL OK. Thank you, Bruce. I'm sure Beth will be along soon to approve your new claims.
Pattymarie
Thanks Bruce and Chad - all those claims are accepted and in the MW!
Fiction: Regiment of Women
Non-Fiction: History Philosophy English Literature Hellenic History
FULL: Gondoliers W&D Sherlock Holmes PSmith Dr Dolittle French Revolution
Non-Fiction: History Philosophy English Literature Hellenic History
FULL: Gondoliers W&D Sherlock Holmes PSmith Dr Dolittle French Revolution
Thanks David! Love to have you!
Fiction: Regiment of Women
Non-Fiction: History Philosophy English Literature Hellenic History
FULL: Gondoliers W&D Sherlock Holmes PSmith Dr Dolittle French Revolution
Non-Fiction: History Philosophy English Literature Hellenic History
FULL: Gondoliers W&D Sherlock Holmes PSmith Dr Dolittle French Revolution
Hello,
Here is Section 3 ready for PL: https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/loveslaves_03_brengle_128kb.mp3 Time: 27:16
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Kind regards,
Chad
Here is Section 3 ready for PL: https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/loveslaves_03_brengle_128kb.mp3 Time: 27:16
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Kind regards,
Chad
Hi Kevin, that’s fine, I’ll put you in for Chapter 18, but please don’t forget you also have a chapter due soon in my “History of Byzantium” project!
Fiction: Regiment of Women
Non-Fiction: History Philosophy English Literature Hellenic History
FULL: Gondoliers W&D Sherlock Holmes PSmith Dr Dolittle French Revolution
Non-Fiction: History Philosophy English Literature Hellenic History
FULL: Gondoliers W&D Sherlock Holmes PSmith Dr Dolittle French Revolution
How could I forget?! Hahah! All those names!
I'll get crackin', I promise.
My LibriVox: https://librivox.org/sections/readers/13278
My LibriVox: https://librivox.org/sections/readers/13278
Can I please claim Section 16 as well?
Kind regards,
Chad
Kind regards,
Chad
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The technical improvement here is wonderful (I didn't notice any harsh sibilants), Chad, but I think you forgot to edit it before uploading. In a listen to the whole file on my portable player, I heard a large number of mistakes. Listening at the computer to find the locations yielded eight repetitions or false starts followed by corrections with the false start left in place in the first six minutes, and I didn't count all of the several hesitating pauses that are no more than a second but which break up the rhythm and are disconcerting to comprehension. I remember it continuing pretty much the same throughout though there's some improvement further along. Would you mind editing and re-uploading the file.:Horner94 wrote: ↑June 15th, 2019, 6:16 pm Hello,
Here is Section 3 ready for PL: https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/loveslaves_T03_brengle_128kb.mp3 Time: 27:16
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Kind regards,
Chad
Here are the locations of the reps and left-in false starts in the first six minutes:
1:45 under/uttered
1:56-57 memory/memory
2:10-11 penitent/penitent
2:26-27 holiest/holiest
2:59 in/in
3:39-3:43 a theory often advances/ a theory is often advanced
4:40-4:43 and such a seeing/ and such a seeming
5:43-47 and that this punishment they are conscious/ and that of this punishment...
I noted the locations of two of the hesitations: 1:37 and 2:36-37 but there are others. Technically they aren't long enough to require removal, but their absence would ease listeners' comprehension. I remember a longer one of about two seconds between an adjective and its noun further on.
Pattymarie