BetsyWalker wrote: ↑
April 28th, 2019, 5:36 pm
Well, by the end of the afternoon, I got my voice back enough to record! Yay - this was fun. In the Intro I included "Act 2". It would be easy for me to delete that if you don't want it there. I figured easier to delete than to add in later.
yes, you can cut out the "Act 2" in your voice credit, it won't get used like that. The voice credit is always without "act" inserted.
Thank you Betsy, what a great performance. Those two will be a very funny double act I imagine. I know TJ will have a field-day with Mrs Cronk.
They look from the start as if they were not inclined to buy anything but only waste the seller's time
No wonder Tossie has a break-down at the end.
I like the prim way you're portraying Mrs Megget, especially in her fervent speech against 'ips.
Great job, but you are missing a few lines at the end of the act. Also, I'd like you to insert 2 longer breaks in two places:
> at 1:25
: (p. 23) you forgot to leave a break of 2 seconds
between these quotes: “It says here, Mrs Cronk (... pause for narrator ...) in this advertisement”
> at 1:46
: (p. 30) "if it's not too much trouble (...stage directions...) it's quite early yet" - same here, you need to remember to leave a long break even in the middle of your sentence, if there is a stage direction to be inserted. It will make Todd’s job easier if he doesn’t have to fiddle too much around small spaces. This one is very short, but still long enough to easily cut and paste, so here it's optional, but the previous one has no room at all and would make editing tricky
> at about 1:54
: (p. 33 & 34) four missing lines
in the final pages of this act:
> This rose du barry looks smartest to me.
> Why, it’s past twelve, I do declare.
> How any decent woman, let alone a widow, could be seen dead in one of these shameful things beats me.
> Good-morning !