[FULL][POETRY] The Poems of Madison Cawein Vol 4 - kit

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Post by silverquill » March 19th, 2019, 10:03 pm

brightwriter419 wrote:
March 19th, 2019, 6:22 pm
JorWat wrote:
March 13th, 2019, 4:13 am
1:24: 'forbade' in 'But its beating I forbade' should be pronounced 'fer-BAD' so that it rhymes with 'clad'. I wouldn't normally correct pronunciation, especially when the pronunciation isn't actually wrong ('fer-BAYD' is an accepted pronunciation), but I have to make an exception for poetry.
Makes sense, I suppose. Here is the edited upload: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_058_cawein_128kb.mp3.

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Post by JorWat » March 21st, 2019, 2:29 pm

brightwriter419 wrote:
March 19th, 2019, 6:22 pm
JorWat wrote:
March 13th, 2019, 4:13 am
1:24: 'forbade' in 'But its beating I forbade' should be pronounced 'fer-BAD' so that it rhymes with 'clad'. I wouldn't normally correct pronunciation, especially when the pronunciation isn't actually wrong ('fer-BAYD' is an accepted pronunciation), but I have to make an exception for poetry.
Makes sense, I suppose. Here is the edited upload: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_058_cawein_128kb.mp3.

Matt
PL OK
All six are PL OK
36 and 38 are PL OK.

14:

0:07-0:17: Repetition of the first two lines
Jordan

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Post by KIBBONAFIDE » March 21st, 2019, 3:00 pm

Thanks for your hard work!

14 reuploaded for Spot PL:


https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_014_cawein_128kb.mp3
3:54
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Post by silverquill » March 21st, 2019, 9:43 pm

KIBBONAFIDE wrote:
March 21st, 2019, 3:00 pm
Thanks for your hard work!

14 reuploaded for Spot PL:


https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_014_cawein_128kb.mp3
3:54
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Post by silverquill » March 21st, 2019, 9:43 pm

KIBBONAFIDE wrote:
March 21st, 2019, 3:00 pm
Thanks for your hard work!

14 reuploaded for Spot PL:


https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_014_cawein_128kb.mp3
3:54
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Post by nighthawks » March 22nd, 2019, 4:49 am

Here is the poem number 41 The Dance of the Fairies.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_041_cawein_128kb.mp3

03:43

:D

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Post by silverquill » March 22nd, 2019, 7:21 am

nighthawks wrote:
March 22nd, 2019, 4:49 am
Here is the poem number 41 The Dance of the Fairies.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_041_cawein_128kb.mp3

03:43

:D
Thanks!
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Post by silverquill » March 22nd, 2019, 9:14 am

And, here are three more from me, a few of the longer ones.
Hieroglyphs was particularly intense and a challenge to read. Let me know if you think anything needs to be changed.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_108_cawein_128kb.mp3 4:46
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_122_cawein_128kb.mp3 8:33
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_124_cawein_128kb.mp3 4:37

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Post by JorWat » March 22nd, 2019, 5:15 pm

KIBBONAFIDE wrote:
March 21st, 2019, 3:00 pm
Thanks for your hard work!

14 reuploaded for Spot PL:


https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_014_cawein_128kb.mp3
3:54
PL OK
nighthawks wrote:
March 22nd, 2019, 4:49 am
Here is the poem number 41 The Dance of the Fairies.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_041_cawein_128kb.mp3

03:43

:D
A couple of things:

0:10, 3:04: 'coppice' from "On the glimmering coppice" and "Come, come to the coppice" is pronounced 'COP-is' so it rhymes with 'top is' (and apparently 'poppies'...)
2:36: "Come hither, sweet singing" should be "Come hither, where singing"
silverquill wrote:
March 22nd, 2019, 9:14 am
And, here are three more from me, a few of the longer ones.
Hieroglyphs was particularly intense and a challenge to read. Let me know if you think anything needs to be changed.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_108_cawein_128kb.mp3 4:46
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_122_cawein_128kb.mp3 8:33
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_124_cawein_128kb.mp3 4:37
108 and 122 are PL OK.

124:

3:11 (not required): 'Derisive' in "Reverent and yet derisive" is normally pronounced 'dih-RYE-siv', but in this case, so that it rhymes with 'submissive', I believe it should be pronounced 'dih-RIS-iv', which is listed in some dictionaries as an alternate pronunciation.
Jordan

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Post by pschempf » March 23rd, 2019, 4:53 pm

Larry/Jordan -

The last section of my batch, section 118 -

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_118_cawein_128kb.mp3
Track length: 3:28
Fritz

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Post by silverquill » March 23rd, 2019, 6:04 pm

pschempf wrote:
March 23rd, 2019, 4:53 pm
Larry/Jordan -

The last section of my batch, section 118 -

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_118_cawein_128kb.mp3
Track length: 3:28
Thanks so much! :)
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Post by JorWat » March 24th, 2019, 7:17 am

pschempf wrote:
March 23rd, 2019, 4:53 pm
Larry/Jordan -

The last section of my batch, section 118 -

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein4_118_cawein_128kb.mp3
Track length: 3:28
Just one small thing.

2:41: 'nacre' in 'And the sea and air are nacre' should be pronounced 'NEY-ker' so it rhymes with 'maker'.
Jordan

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