COMPLETE [ESSAYS] Twentieth Century Negro Literature-mas

Post by **mightyfelix** » March 19th, 2019, 10:59 am

Thanks, everyone. MW updated!

PhyllisV · Post by **PhyllisV** » March 20th, 2019, 8:08 am

Section 10:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/negroliterature_010_culp_128kb.mp3
21:56

PhyllisV · Post by **PhyllisV** » March 20th, 2019, 8:12 am

I would like to claim sections 20, 21 and 22.

Post by **mightyfelix** » March 20th, 2019, 3:52 pm

Thank you, Phyllis!

Post by **mightyfelix** » March 20th, 2019, 9:45 pm

bhavya wrote: ↑March 19th, 2019, 3:40 am https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/negroliterature_094_culp_128kb.mp3
8:08

Section 94 for PL!

Thank you. This was very interesting, and not quite what I was expecting. I have a couple of quick notes to address.

0:21 trim down the space before author's name. No more than a second or so would be great.
At about 7:33, I hear "and sold at from seventy-five to one dollar per pound" This should be "and sold at from seventy-five cents to one dollar per pound."

Post by **mightyfelix** » March 22nd, 2019, 10:28 am

Notes for section 12:

10:35-10:37 False start "This can be shown..." should be cut.

This section was extremely good, I thought. I appreciated the honesty with which the author basically rejected the premise of the question itself.

Post by **mightyfelix** » March 22nd, 2019, 11:05 am

I really really enjoyed section 4! You did a great job with the list about mid-way through. It was very easy to follow. The paragraph about the state of women under slavery actually brought me to tears.

There is one minor note you may wish to address:

There is a "hiccup" or break in the audio at about 0:18 "Recording by..." I'm hearing it in the same spot no matter how I do playback, so I think it's in the mp3 itself, not my computer. It may have been an uploading error, especially if that break isn't present in the copy you have. If it is present in your copy, it should be very easy for you to just copy/paste this sentence from another section of yours.

Post by **mightyfelix** » March 22nd, 2019, 11:22 am

Section 14 is PL ok! This was another position which surprised me a little. There are many viewpoints given in these papers which I would never have considered!

PhyllisV · Post by **PhyllisV** » March 23rd, 2019, 8:58 am

Section 20:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/negroliterature_020_culp_128kb.mp3
18:31

PhyllisV · Post by **PhyllisV** » March 23rd, 2019, 9:23 am

mightyfelix wrote: ↑March 22nd, 2019, 11:05 am I really really enjoyed section 4! You did a great job with the list about mid-way through. It was very easy to follow. The paragraph about the state of women under slavery actually brought me to tears.

There is one minor note you may wish to address:

There is a "hiccup" or break in the audio at about 0:18 "Recording by..." I'm hearing it in the same spot no matter how I do playback, so I think it's in the mp3 itself, not my computer. It may have been an uploading error, especially if that break isn't present in the copy you have. If it is present in your copy, it should be very easy for you to just copy/paste this sentence from another section of yours.

Thanks for the feedback. I fixed the 'hiccup'

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/negroliterature_004_culp_128kb.mp3
22:28

drandall · Post by **drandall** » March 23rd, 2019, 1:11 pm

I would like to claim sections 32, 33, 34.

Post by **mightyfelix** » March 24th, 2019, 3:19 pm

Thanks, everyone. MW updated. Section 4 is PL ok now!

I'm preparing to leave on vacation in about a week and will try to catch up on PLs before I go, but no promises.

I have quite a lot to finish up this week before I leave. Thanks for your patience!

PhyllisV · Post by **PhyllisV** » March 26th, 2019, 11:13 am

Section 21:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/negroliterature_021_culp_128kb.mp3
13:35

Shasta · Post by **Shasta** » March 26th, 2019, 1:03 pm

Here is corrected Section 12

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/negroliterature_012_culp_128kb.mp3 Time: 27:05

Post by **mightyfelix** » March 26th, 2019, 11:36 pm

Shasta wrote: ↑March 26th, 2019, 1:03 pm Here is corrected Section 12

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/negroliterature_012_culp_128kb.mp3 Time: 27:05

PL ok now.

And thank you both! MW updated.