Thanks for the recording. Here are your notes:christopherhoving wrote: ↑March 17th, 2019, 8:52 amSection 19 upload is now available:
0:22: I think you should add 'Part 1' after 'Observation 6: Of Small Glass Canes'
1:16: Some stuttering between 'differing' and 'aspect' in 'what was the differing aspect' (Deleting the section from 1:16.748 to 1:17.036 should be more than adequate; no need to re-record)
7:47: 'without leaving some kind of it behind' should be 'without leaving some part of it behind'
9:19-9:34: Repetition of 'but it presently emerges or swims as 'twere on the top; nor can you lay a heavier on the top of it, as a piece of Lead'.
13:00: 'so that as every drop of it has its proportionate share, as I have try'd' should be 'so as every drop of it has its proportionate share, and be sensibly ting'd, as I have try'd'
15:10-15:12: 'And since, that in very many other properties' is a failed take that needs to be removed
17:29: 'such, I suppose fermented vinous Spirits' should be 'such, I suppose ☿ [mercury], fermented vinous Spirits'
18:27: 'we shall find that by the agitation of the fine sand will eject' should be 'we shall find that by the agitation[,] the fine sand will eject'
21:31: 'very easily collect, that it is the reason' should be 'very easily collect, what is the reason'
24:01: Some stuttering between 'next' and 'they' in 'And next they cause' (Deleting the section from 24:02.147 to 24:02.277 should be more than adequate; no need to re-record)
24:48: 'Whence, on the contrary' should be 'Hence, on the contrary'
26:36: 'or with a solid' should be 'or only with a solid'
30:00: 'because of the similar difference' should be 'because of the smaller difference'
30:39: 'EFG' should be 'EGFH'
31:11: Some stuttering between 'a' and 'small' in 'as suppose a small glass jar' (Deleting the section from 31:11.929 to 31:12.170 should be more than adequate; no need to re-record)
31:40: 'which to our sense would appear straight Line' should be 'which to our sense would appear a straight Line'
31:55: 'as CBH' should be 'as CHB'
32:17: 'it easily conforms to it self' should be 'it easily conforms it self' (Deleting the section from 32:18.094 to 32:18.242 should be more than adequate; no need to re-record)
34:09: Some stuttering between 'then' and 'the' in 'does more readily adhere then the air' (Deleting the section from 34:10.715 to 34:11.013 should be more than adequate; no need to re-record)
35:11: 'of any other Figure then the Globular' should be 'of any other Figure then Globular' (Deleting the section from 35:12.344 to 35:12.487 should be more than adequate; no need to re-record)
36:32: 'were quite requisite' should be 'were it requisite'
37:48-37:55: Repetition of 'M be 1/32 of an inch'
39:04: 'the Experimenter must take the Tube AB' should be 'the Experimenter must place the Tube AB'
40:38: 'a Cylinder of Quicksilver in two foot and a half high' should be 'a Cylinder of Quicksilver of two foot and a half high'
41:16-41:55: Repetition of 'The Conclusion therefore will necessarily follow ... cause of these Phænomena.' (The first version is correct)
41:55: You need to include 'End of Section 9' here