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Lmnei
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Hi Mark -

That was a REALLY good reading of Section 13! I have a couple of notes, which mainly deal with reading of the charts and making what you read for the charts equal all the way down, especially the first one. As Carolin mentioned to you, this indeed is Section 13 and your recording needs to reflect that so I have marked those locations too. PLEASE do not let this list get you down - half of it is for 1 table and completing the missing items to make it even. For the amount you recorded there is very little feedback here!

:02 – s/b Section 13
:22 – s/b Section 13
2:59 – missing a “white”
3:10 – remove the word “otherwise” not in text
3:14 – missing “W. W. Y. Y. Red”
3:17 – missing “W. W. Y. Y. R. R.”
3:21 – missing “W. Y. Y. R. R.”
3:24 – missing “Y. Y. R. R.”
3:28 – missing “Y. R. R.”
3:32 – missing “Y. R. R. Black,”
3:36 – missing “Y. R. R. B. B.”
3:42 – missing “R. R. B. B.”
3:47 – missing “R. B. B.”
3:50 – missing “black”
11:13 – missing row for 157
13:44 – heard “salabitory”, text says salubrity
16:03 – stumble – remove the “vine”
17:22 – stumble – just before “more powerful”
18:18 – missing “white” which is part of the bracket
20:19 – stumbled “are mowed”
26:01 – repeat “this is established” remove the first one and keep “this is establishing”
26:40 – stumble – “to become” and “to have to become”
29:25 – s/b Section 13

Lastly, if you scroll down on Page 1 under the Magic Window (the thing that lists all the sections) and look at item 10, it shows how to name your file to upload. All Librivox files are named the same and the difference is you put the Section number where the XX's are. Sometimes there are two XX's and sometimes 3 as the number of sections goes over 100. If this one had over 100 sections you would enter 013 however for this book it is just 13.

Here is the format: brewing_##_combrune_128kb.mp3 (all lower-case) where ## is the section number (e.g. brewing_01_combrune_128kb.mp3)


So if you can do those edits and then save the file as specified and upload it and then post the link and the time again like you did last time that would be awesome and I will take another listen!

Have a great day!

Lynda
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Thank you lynda :thumbs:

Mark, please let us know if you have any questions or need any help!
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Section 28 please.
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Thank you :thumbs:
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Hi, I would like to claim section 18: of Extraction p1.

Let me know, thank you
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Thank you both :thumbs:
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briann wrote: March 17th, 2019, 11:04 am Section 28, 4:17
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/brewing_28_combrune_128kb.mp3.mp3
Excellent reading Brian!

It is PL OK! :thumbs:

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Lmnei wrote: March 18th, 2019, 2:13 pm Excellent reading Brian!

It is PL OK! :thumbs:

Lynda
thanks!!
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Thank you lynda!
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we have orphans!
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Post by Gren »

Are Sections 2 and 4 (Of Fire, Of Water) still up for grabs? If so, I'd really like to claim them :D

- Gren
I was a young maid, a grey-haired woman
& a splendid warrior at one time
I flew with birds, swam on a wave
dove under the waves, dead among the fish.
I stepped on the ground, I had a living spirit.

- Exeter Riddle 74, my translation
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Great choices, thank you :thumbs:
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Post by Gren »

I was a young maid, a grey-haired woman
& a splendid warrior at one time
I flew with birds, swam on a wave
dove under the waves, dead among the fish.
I stepped on the ground, I had a living spirit.

- Exeter Riddle 74, my translation
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thank you :D
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