[Complete] The Black Eagle Mystery by Geraldine Bonner - lt
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Chapter 7:
5:11 - Repeat of phrase, "So after I'd put on my hat and coat"
5:10 - Repeat of phrase, "Troop came off"
18:20 - Change in meaning: "At a few minutes after" is changed to "At a few minutes earlier" - that would be confusing as they are specifically talking of the time line of the murder
19:20 - Repeat of sentence "This man didn't attempt the job alone."
5:11 - Repeat of phrase, "So after I'd put on my hat and coat"
5:10 - Repeat of phrase, "Troop came off"
18:20 - Change in meaning: "At a few minutes after" is changed to "At a few minutes earlier" - that would be confusing as they are specifically talking of the time line of the murder
19:20 - Repeat of sentence "This man didn't attempt the job alone."
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5:11 - Repeat of phrase, "So after I'd put on my hat and coat"jenniferrd wrote: ↑November 12th, 2018, 8:51 pmChapter 7:
5:11 - Repeat of phrase, "So after I'd put on my hat and coat"
5:10 - Repeat of phrase, "Troop came off"
18:20 - Change in meaning: "At a few minutes after" is changed to "At a few minutes earlier" - that would be confusing as they are specifically talking of the time line of the murder
19:20 - Repeat of sentence "This man didn't attempt the job alone."
5:16 - Repeat of phrase, "Troop came off"
18:14 - Change in meaning: "At a few minutes after" is changed to "At a few minutes earlier" - that would be confusing as they are specifically talking of the time line of the murder
19:16 - Repeat of sentence "This man didn't attempt the job alone."
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Chapter 9:
04:17 - missing the word "been" in "she'd been a radiant, blooming Amazon in the country", it's read "she had a radiant, blooming Amazon in the country"
04:36.5 - missing the word "beastly" in "and felt beastly uncomfortable while I was doing it" - since this doesn't change the meaning, I'll leave it up to you if you want to correct it.
8:02 - You say resental for resentful. - again, that might be just pronunciation, so up to you on that one.
9:30 - the word "catch is pronounced "clatch" in "clasping and unclasping the catch"
16:44 - this didn't make sense, you read "It wasn't only the expression of her face" as "It wasn't the only expression of her face" - I don't think we can have two expressions on our face.
Great job, this was an exciting chapter!
04:17 - missing the word "been" in "she'd been a radiant, blooming Amazon in the country", it's read "she had a radiant, blooming Amazon in the country"
04:36.5 - missing the word "beastly" in "and felt beastly uncomfortable while I was doing it" - since this doesn't change the meaning, I'll leave it up to you if you want to correct it.
8:02 - You say resental for resentful. - again, that might be just pronunciation, so up to you on that one.
9:30 - the word "catch is pronounced "clatch" in "clasping and unclasping the catch"
16:44 - this didn't make sense, you read "It wasn't only the expression of her face" as "It wasn't the only expression of her face" - I don't think we can have two expressions on our face.

Great job, this was an exciting chapter!
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Just general FYI: I haven't had opportunity to record for the last bit because my living situation blew up.
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Hope your situation settles down soon.lethargilistic wrote: ↑November 27th, 2018, 12:39 pmJust general FYI: I haven't had opportunity to record for the last bit because my living situation blew up.
Just try and check in every couple of months and all will be well here.
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No longer homeless!jenniferrd wrote: ↑November 16th, 2018, 6:22 amChapter 9:
04:17 - missing the word "been" in "she'd been a radiant, blooming Amazon in the country", it's read "she had a radiant, blooming Amazon in the country"
04:36.5 - missing the word "beastly" in "and felt beastly uncomfortable while I was doing it" - since this doesn't change the meaning, I'll leave it up to you if you want to correct it.
8:02 - You say resental for resentful. - again, that might be just pronunciation, so up to you on that one.
9:30 - the word "catch is pronounced "clatch" in "clasping and unclasping the catch"
16:44 - this didn't make sense, you read "It wasn't only the expression of her face" as "It wasn't the only expression of her face" - I don't think we can have two expressions on our face.![]()
Great job, this was an exciting chapter!
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/blackeaglemystery_09_bonner_128kb.mp3
04:17 - Added "been"
04:36.5 - I couldn't get the voice match even close with the correction, so I left "beastly" out.
8:02 - "Resentful" fixed
9:30 - "clatch" -> "catch"
16:44 - "It wasn't only the expression of her face" fixed.
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Chapter 10
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/blackeaglemystery_10_bonner_128kb.mp3 (21:14)
In big news, we just learned that Yunnie is alive! Her death was apparently a hoax propagated against her will by people in her life for reasons she understandably doesn't want to share. We couldn't be more relieved.
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/blackeaglemystery_10_bonner_128kb.mp3 (21:14)
In big news, we just learned that Yunnie is alive! Her death was apparently a hoax propagated against her will by people in her life for reasons she understandably doesn't want to share. We couldn't be more relieved.
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Chapter 10:
4:13 - I hear, "It didn't phaze me a bit" and it should be "It didn't phaze him a bit."
11:51 - I hear "Dipping with a gunman" and it should be "Dining with a gunman."
14:40 - I hear "That's not how I stumbled on his secret," and it should be, "That's how I stumbled on his secret"
19:26 - I hear "Seeing out of the tall of my eye," and it should be "Seeing out of the tail of my eye."
19:44 - I hear "Then like a steak down the steps, and it should be "Then like a streak down the steps."
How wonderful to hear your friend is okay!
What an exciting chapter!
4:13 - I hear, "It didn't phaze me a bit" and it should be "It didn't phaze him a bit."
11:51 - I hear "Dipping with a gunman" and it should be "Dining with a gunman."
14:40 - I hear "That's not how I stumbled on his secret," and it should be, "That's how I stumbled on his secret"
19:26 - I hear "Seeing out of the tall of my eye," and it should be "Seeing out of the tail of my eye."
19:44 - I hear "Then like a steak down the steps, and it should be "Then like a streak down the steps."
How wonderful to hear your friend is okay!
What an exciting chapter!
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4:13 - "It didn't phaze him a bit."jenniferrd wrote: ↑February 24th, 2019, 6:02 pmChapter 10:
4:13 - I hear, "It didn't phaze me a bit" and it should be "It didn't phaze him a bit."
11:51 - I hear "Dipping with a gunman" and it should be "Dining with a gunman."
14:40 - I hear "That's not how I stumbled on his secret," and it should be, "That's how I stumbled on his secret"
19:26 - I hear "Seeing out of the tall of my eye," and it should be "Seeing out of the tail of my eye."
19:43 - I hear "Then like a steak down the steps, and it should be "Then like a streak down the steps."
How wonderful to hear your friend is okay!
What an exciting chapter!
11:51 - "Dining with a gunman."
14:40 - "That's how I stumbled on his secret"
19:26 - "Seeing out of the tail of my eye."
19:44 - "Then like a streak down the steps."
Mike
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I've posted Chapter 12. ^^
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/blackeaglemystery_12_bonner_128kb.mp3 (14:31)
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/blackeaglemystery_12_bonner_128kb.mp3 (14:31)
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