Separate file, please.(Rising.) Perhaps if we keep quite quiet he’ll go away.
Thanks, Todd
Separate file, please.(Rising.) Perhaps if we keep quite quiet he’ll go away.
Sorry about that; here you are:
Thanks, Devorah! Turns out I had recorded it twice, but cut one out while editing. Oops. Now the missing line is at 3:00.mightyfelix wrote: ↑March 16th, 2019, 10:54 am For Mamie, act 3:
2:59 Missing line "Now the next one." (This line is said twice in succession. The directions for the second one are "sweetly." You've recorded it once, rather sweetly in my opinion. Maybe recording it for the first instance in a more stern or impatient tone?)
Otherwise, nothing missing, and very well done! Looking forward to act 2.
Thanks, Devorah. I cut the extra "no more tears" out. The line starts at 2:38.mightyfelix wrote: ↑March 20th, 2019, 9:30 pm Thanks, TJ. Act 3 is PL ok. Act 2 has one extra line. Todd could cut it easily, but it may make his job easier to go ahead and remove it now.
2:39-2:41 There is a superfluous "no more tears" here.
PL ok! Mamie is all finished and ready to go out to dinner!benderca wrote: ↑March 21st, 2019, 8:44 amThanks, Devorah. I cut the extra "no more tears" out. The line starts at 2:38.mightyfelix wrote: ↑March 20th, 2019, 9:30 pm Thanks, TJ. Act 3 is PL ok. Act 2 has one extra line. Todd could cut it easily, but it may make his job easier to go ahead and remove it now.
2:39-2:41 There is a superfluous "no more tears" here.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_mamiescott_2_128kb.mp3
Yay! Ready to go out for dinner and dance a little ragtime!mightyfelix wrote: ↑March 21st, 2019, 10:30 am
PL ok! Mamie is all finished and ready to go out to dinner!