[GRP/POLITICS] Handbook of Home Rule by Various - tg
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Thanks! Run time, please? (minutes:seconds)
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America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
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Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
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And here's Section 8 (25.01)...
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/handbookofhomerule_08_various.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/handbookofhomerule_08_various.mp3
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Thank you, Jame! I suddenly have a whole bucket of listening to do; I hope to get to these sometime later this evening.
School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
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Section 7:
6:33 - "little more than an offensive and defensive alliance" - I hear "a defensive and defensive alliance"
6:33 - "little more than an offensive and defensive alliance" - I hear "a defensive and defensive alliance"
School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
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Section 8:
10:22 - "Secondly, that, in granting..." repeated at 10:43 (10:22-10:43 can be removed)
16:52 - "under a land scheme such as that of 1886" repeated at 16:57
In this and the previous section (moreso in this one, I think), you have a lot of little stumbles that could be edited out pretty easily, making for a smoother sounding reading. I would recommend this, as it's technically a part of "standard PL" (stumbles and repeats are to be removed). I won't require it, but I do think that both you as reader and any listeners would be better pleased with the recording if they were removed.
10:22 - "Secondly, that, in granting..." repeated at 10:43 (10:22-10:43 can be removed)
16:52 - "under a land scheme such as that of 1886" repeated at 16:57
In this and the previous section (moreso in this one, I think), you have a lot of little stumbles that could be edited out pretty easily, making for a smoother sounding reading. I would recommend this, as it's technically a part of "standard PL" (stumbles and repeats are to be removed). I won't require it, but I do think that both you as reader and any listeners would be better pleased with the recording if they were removed.
School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
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Yes, some of those never-ending sentences were taking their toll late last night! I'll revisit both sections and post new ones when I can (might be a week or so). J
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No worries, there's time.
Yes, some of these long sentences and old-fashioned ways of speaking really mess with the reading!
Yes, some of these long sentences and old-fashioned ways of speaking really mess with the reading!
School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
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Claim section 24 please.
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Thank you, Kathleen!
School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
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Signature: KATHLEEN
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Thank you!
School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
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Section 24 PL OK.
The end silence is 10 seconds, and only needs to be 5, but that's not worth editing.
The end silence is 10 seconds, and only needs to be 5, but that's not worth editing.
School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
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They're yours!
School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart