COMPLETE[PLAYS]One Act Play Collection 012 - thw

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Post by aaronwhite1977 » March 7th, 2019, 2:08 pm

Upon the recommendation of wonderful Sonia - may I please claim the part of Mr. Alexis Twisselton, in Everybody's Husband!

Thanks!
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Post by NemoR » March 7th, 2019, 3:05 pm

Nemo

"I find I cannot exist without Poetry—without eternal Poetry—half the day will not do—the whole of it—I began with a little, but habit has made me a Leviathan."

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Post by ToddHW » March 7th, 2019, 3:59 pm

Thank you. MW updated.

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Post by silverquill » March 8th, 2019, 8:39 pm

NemoR wrote:
March 7th, 2019, 3:05 pm
Hi Larry,

Holger for PL: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whythechimesrang_holger_mcfadden.mp3

10:10
Oh, so cool. :thumbs:
I'll get to the PL as soon as I can.

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Post by silverquill » March 8th, 2019, 8:52 pm

Ah, Devorah, an open part just for me!

Could I read Figgins in "Everybody's Husband?"

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Post by mightyfelix » March 8th, 2019, 11:14 pm

That would be lovely, thanks Larry! It's a hoot! :D

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Post by Kitty » March 9th, 2019, 1:43 am

silverquill wrote:
March 8th, 2019, 8:52 pm
Could I read Figgins in "Everybody's Husband?"
Larry and Todd as double-act of Figgins and Spriggins....this will be awesome to listen to :mrgreen:

You're signed up, and that makes Everybody's husband fully claimed

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Post by leanneyauyau » March 11th, 2019, 10:36 am

Leanne (leanneyauyau) :9:
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Post by aaronwhite1977 » March 11th, 2019, 2:59 pm

Here is Mr. Alexis Twisselton for Everybody's Husband.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everybodyshusband_mralexistwisselton_ryan.mp3

and I just realized that I didn't compress. I'd be glad to do that if you think it sounds bad!
Thanks!
Aaron

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Post by mightyfelix » March 11th, 2019, 3:44 pm

aaronwhite1977 wrote:
March 11th, 2019, 2:59 pm
Here is Mr. Alexis Twisselton for Everybody's Husband.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everybodyshusband_mralexistwisselton_ryan.mp3

and I just realized that I didn't compress. I'd be glad to do that if you think it sounds bad!
Thanks!
Aaron
Thanks. I'll try to PL this tonight or tomorrow. Any compression or other editing can be done by me when I combine all the parts together. For dramatic recordings, less is more when it comes to editing.

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Post by Kitty » March 12th, 2019, 1:09 am

hehe another lawyer who likes to hear himself speak ;) well done Leanne, I liked the performance.

Only one tiny thing to add:

> at 0:01: for the voice credit you forgot to add your name “read by Leanne Yau

thanks !

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Post by leanneyauyau » March 12th, 2019, 4:59 am

Leanne (leanneyauyau) :9:
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Post by Kitty » March 12th, 2019, 5:06 am

leanneyauyau wrote:
March 12th, 2019, 4:59 am
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/theflyingdoctor_lawyer_moliere.mp3

updated :) i'll unsub now.
PL ok now, thanks :)

Sonia

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Post by lymiewithpurpose » March 12th, 2019, 8:26 pm

aaronwhite1977 wrote:
March 11th, 2019, 2:59 pm
Here is Mr. Alexis Twisselton for Everybody's Husband.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everybodyshusband_mralexistwisselton_ryan.mp3

and I just realized that I didn't compress. I'd be glad to do that if you think it sounds bad!
Thanks!
Aaron
Hi Aaron! Devorah said that I could PL this short play for her, so here I am :D. I took a listen, I loved the character you put in it! So perfectly obnoxiously awkward! I do have a few notes for you however:

One thing I noticed is that almost always you forgot to leave space in between those points where you are interrupted by stage directions (Aside, pointing at x, ringing, etc.). Sometimes you left 1-2 seconds, sometimes not even 1. At first I started noting those times down, but they were so numerous that I stopped. I think the question goes out to Devorah now, do you want this to be fixed, or just something to watch out for in the future?

Textual notes are as follows:
5:27 – not sure if this was intentional, repeat of ‘how’
15:08 – missing line ‘Here goes’
20:36 - please add a bit more room between these lines, a bit tight at the moment

Note for Devorah: the text at 20:18 is laughing (for a sound effect in another character's speech). Just thought I'd give you a heads up in case you are one of those editors who edit first and then listen :D

Overall, was excellent! Can't wait to hear everything together, quite a hilarious little play!
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