[Complete] The Cave Twins by Lucy Fitch Perkins - philc

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Post by ToddHW » March 2nd, 2019, 7:24 am

Thank you. Let me know if you want to be DPL.

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Post by libraryanne » March 2nd, 2019, 8:36 am

I've now PL'ed the first threee sections

Section 0 is PL OK!


Section 1 has two little glitches:
at 7:27 missed edit, repeat in “I know your tricks worthless ones. You have brought me nothing but a fright and a tumble in the ashes.”


At 8:03 repeat in “Firetop sprang up the rocks down which he had climbed…”



Section 2 has a little glitch you might want to redo

At 6:08 heard “feet” in “Around his neck was a string of bear’s teeth.”


Overall nice readings. I'm not volunteering as DPL at this time, but I'll have time to PL section 3 tomorrow.
I'm taking the liberty of updating the MW.


Betty

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Post by bhavya » March 2nd, 2019, 9:01 am

Thank you so much! I will edit them tomorrow.

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Post by lymiewithpurpose » March 2nd, 2019, 5:19 pm

Hi guys! I am willing to DPL this (since Betty says she only wants to PL through the next chapter). Just had another PL project finish, and I'm ready for another :lol:
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Post by ToddHW » March 2nd, 2019, 7:40 pm

lymiewithpurpose wrote:
March 2nd, 2019, 5:19 pm
Hi guys! I am willing to DPL this (since Betty says she only wants to PL through the next chapter). Just had another PL project finish, and I'm ready for another :lol:
Thank you.

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Post by bhavya » March 2nd, 2019, 10:27 pm

lymiewithpurpose wrote:
March 2nd, 2019, 5:19 pm
Hi guys! I am willing to DPL this (since Betty says she only wants to PL through the next chapter). Just had another PL project finish, and I'm ready for another :lol:
Thank you!

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Post by libraryanne » March 3rd, 2019, 7:23 am

Hi,
I've PL'ed chapter 3 and it's PL OK! Now that there's a DPL for this project, I'll wish you good luck on completing this story. MW updated.

Cheers,
Betty

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Post by bhavya » March 3rd, 2019, 8:46 am

libraryanne wrote:
March 3rd, 2019, 7:23 am
Hi,
I've PL'ed chapter 3 and it's PL OK! Now that there's a DPL for this project, I'll wish you good luck on completing this story. MW updated.

Cheers,
Betty
Thank you Betty :D !

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Post by bhavya » March 4th, 2019, 10:56 pm

Hello Todd,

Can we remove this project from listeners wanted?

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Post by ToddHW » March 5th, 2019, 4:18 am

I can't find it there to delete. Can you post a link?

Thanks, Todd

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Post by bhavya » March 5th, 2019, 4:24 am

ToddHW wrote:
March 5th, 2019, 4:18 am
I can't find it there to delete. Can you post a link?

Thanks, Todd
:oops: my mistake, its not there. Funnily though, i did post a link :hmm: . But it doesn't matter now.

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Post by ToddHW » March 5th, 2019, 5:02 am

Either way, it is cleaned up now. So all is good.

Thanks, Todd

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Post by bhavya » March 6th, 2019, 8:23 am

Sections 1 and 2 are ready for spot pl and section 4 is ready for pl!

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Post by lymiewithpurpose » March 6th, 2019, 7:10 pm

Hello! I only listened to chapter 4 since Betty PLed the other few sections. It's a really great story! Unfortunately I have quite a bit of notes:

First of all, there was quite a bit of background noises. Not anything that can be edited out, just strange whistles and other noises. I mentioned only the most distracting ones. In addition, there were quite a few minor stumbles. I only mentioned major stumbles/long pauses. Let me know if you want me to mention more!

3:10 – distracting noise
3:48 – stumble
7:34 - stumble/repeat of ‘are’
10:00 – long pause and word ‘mistake’
11: 24 – pause, there were similar pauses at other places, let me know if you want me to mention this
14:40 – loud banging and pause
14:56 – ringtone in background
Very loud click at end
Overall volume is a bit over 92 dbs, it would be great if you could amplify the volume a bit.

Overall I really enjoyed it though and can't wait for more!
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Post by bhavya » March 6th, 2019, 8:53 pm

Thank you Campbell! I assure you, the quality will be better next time :) . I think you can mention if the pauses are very long and might potentially be distracting to the reader. I'll reupload the file tonight.

Also, you can refer to the PL notes given by Betty and check if the other two recording s are spot pL OK.

Thank you!

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