Thank you, Todd. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I think it will be a riot when it's all put together.
I like the dry tone you've given to Vellum, especially when he breaks into his lecturing mode. Also his "jocular" moments, which give a nice contrast. I do have some notes for you. The first one is easy, and I'll leave it up to you whether or not to change it. In your voice credit, you say "recorded by Todd." I'm used to hearing "read by," and I expect that's how the rest of the credits will come in. I don't mind leaving yours as it is, but wanted to point it out in case you wanted to change it.
The second issue is a bit more extensive, and I feel a little bad asking for the change, because it happens many times.

But it seems you missed my note in the first post regarding "Mrs. Abigail." I've done some research on the "Mrs." abbreviation, and I believe this should be "Mistress." That mode of address was far more common and respectful than "Missus" at the time this was written, and I think "Missus" is confusing, because it gives the impression that she's already married. Unfortunately, Vellum is a bit obsessed with her and repeats her name
far more often than is reasonable, so there are many instances where this shows up.

I've noted them all below. Please take your time, there's no rush at all. And again, I'm sorry to ask it, but I really want to be consistent with this. Thank you!
Act 2:
4:19
4:34
4:41
4:51
6:48
Act 3:
2:09
2:27
2:31
2:41
2:48
3:01
3:18
3:27
3:41
3:54
4:00
4:08
4:36
5:04
Act 4:
2:51
3:07
4:11
Act 5:
0:34
2:18