COMPLETE[PLAY]The Lying Lover by Steele - thw
Here's the rest of the stage directions:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_narrator_4_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_narrator_5_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_narrator_4_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_narrator_5_128kb.mp3
Foon - Real life is getting in the way of LV, will be slow until all is back on track, please bear with me!
Readers needed:
Dramatic Reading: The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Folklore/legends: Arabian Nights Vol. 11
Play: Zeus the Tragedian
Readers needed:
Dramatic Reading: The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Folklore/legends: Arabian Nights Vol. 11
Play: Zeus the Tragedian
Thank you.
Todd
Todd
thanks, Foon, that was fast Todd is always happy when he has the stage directions quite early on.
two small notes for Act 4:
> at 2:26: Lettice, aside - I think the aside is all of it, so we need the name
> at about 2:50: missing: Exit
Question for Todd for Act 5:
> at about 3:40: "Song by Mr Leveridge" - do you want to "announce" the song ? then Foon needs to include that line as well, otherwise it's PL ok.
Sonia
Absolutely delighted to have the stage directions!Kitty wrote: ↑February 4th, 2019, 10:32 amthanks, Foon, that was fast Todd is always happy when he has the stage directions quite early on.
Question for Todd for Act 5:
> at about 3:40: "Song by Mr Leveridge" - do you want to "announce" the song ? then Foon needs to include that line as well, otherwise it's PL ok.
Sonia
Don't need the song announced, so it is PL OK.
Thanks, Todd
And here's another one for spot PL!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_narrator_4_128kb.mp3 5:18
Foon - Real life is getting in the way of LV, will be slow until all is back on track, please bear with me!
Readers needed:
Dramatic Reading: The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Folklore/legends: Arabian Nights Vol. 11
Play: Zeus the Tragedian
Readers needed:
Dramatic Reading: The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Folklore/legends: Arabian Nights Vol. 11
Play: Zeus the Tragedian
pistol pete, CC
thanks Pete ! well it's actually gaoler, not goaler (nothing to do with football) but at least you recorded it correctly, so the file name is not important.pmstrahm wrote: ↑February 14th, 2019, 7:20 pmhere is the Goaler
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_goaler_5_128kb.mp3
how sad he only had one line, but you made the most of it. All correct and PL ok.
Sonia
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the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose
the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose
Thank you.
Todd
Todd
Simon totally PL ok. You are excelling in the trusty man-servant roles, Alan thank youalanmapstone wrote: ↑February 16th, 2019, 10:20 pm Simon act 2
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_simon_2.mp3
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https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_frederick_1_128kb.mp3 1:05
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_frederick_2_128kb.mp3 0:37
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_frederick_4_128kb.mp3 3:45
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_frederick_5_128kb.mp3 5:34
Submitted for your approval.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_frederick_2_128kb.mp3 0:37
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_frederick_4_128kb.mp3 3:45
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_frederick_5_128kb.mp3 5:34
Submitted for your approval.
Thank you.
Todd
Todd
thank you, Ken you play the "best buddy" to perfection, and the whole intriguing is very well acted out. I especially love the laughing undertone in some parts and the very tearful performances in two places.MajorToast wrote: ↑February 18th, 2019, 1:00 amhttps://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_frederick_1_128kb.mp3 1:05
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_frederick_2_128kb.mp3 0:37
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_frederick_4_128kb.mp3 3:45
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lyinglover_frederick_5_128kb.mp3 5:34
Submitted for your approval.
Act 2 is already PL ok, but I have a few notes for the other three acts:
Act 1:
> after 0:40: you don't really need to say "end of act 1" and from then on it's all a repetition of the previous lines. Was there one version you prefered ? If so you could cut out the others, unless you want Todd to choose. In that case all would be ok
Act 4:
> at 0:10: "That compliment won't pass upon me" - you say "complaint" but it wasn't a complaint at all that Lovemore made
> at 0:59: "you can't so much as see her chamber window, you must needs walk hither" - I hear "widow" but I may be mistaken there, but you definitely said "talk" instead of "walk"
> at 3:13: "He told Lovemore this morning such a relation of his feasting ladies" - you say "relationship" which is a misunderstanding here. "relation" only means "narrative, tale" here in this context, not a "family member"
Act 5:
> at 4:10: "Don't you know, pride, scorn, affectation" - you say "affection" which is too positive a quality and would not fit here in this enumeration
> at 5:08: "now you may press his livid lips" - I think I hear "vivid" lips, which is exactly the contrary
thanks
Sonia