[COMPLETE]The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn - philc

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Post by Lmnei » February 14th, 2019, 11:15 am

lomond wrote:
February 14th, 2019, 11:09 am
Greetings -

Just one PL Note for Chapter 24:

Time: 17:57 Text has "Kin any of you gentlemen tell me wher' Mr. Peter Wilks lives?” Reading has a repeat starting "Kin any of you".

Otherwise, ready to go.

Lomond
Here it is back Lomond ready for Spot PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/huckfinn_24_twain_128kb.mp3 - 20:11 - note new time please.

Lynda

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Post by lomond » February 14th, 2019, 11:39 am

Lmnei wrote:
February 14th, 2019, 11:15 am

Here it is back Lomond ready for Spot PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/huckfinn_24_twain_128kb.mp3 - 20:11 - note new time please.

Lynda
Greetings -

That was quick! Spot checked, MW updated.

Lomond

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Post by ej400 » February 14th, 2019, 11:49 am

Edits for Chapter 30:

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/huckfinn_30_twain_128kb.mp3 -9:06

Chapter 30. Edit @ 1:49. Edit @ 6:44. Edit @ 8:21

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Post by ej400 » February 14th, 2019, 2:45 pm

Chapter 26 edits: Edit @ 2:44. Edit @ 5:15. Edit @ 5:18. No edit @ 7:19, or 8:44. I think time and minute kind of mean the same thing though, and it didn't seem like it changed anything to the story. Edit @ 13:50 Edit @ 15:07 Edit @ 15:33 Edit @ 16:00 Edit @ 17:04 Edit @ 19:05 No edit @ 19:43 I didn't hear a stumble or the words "in it" Edit @ 19:56 Edit @ 20:11 I'm going to end up re-reading chapter 29 because the lines and stuff got screwed up and trying to find where the text lines up with the times is going to be very hard.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/huckfinn_26_twain_128kb.mp3 -21:04

Thank you
Elijah

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Post by JayKitty76 » February 14th, 2019, 3:46 pm

Thanks, Lomond, Lynda and Elijah. It's fine to rerecord Elijah, I've done that myself.
--Rachel--
Dumbledore watched the doe fly away, and as her silvery glow faded he turned back to Snape, and his eyes were full of tears.
"After all this time?"
"Always," said Snape
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Post by JayKitty76 » February 14th, 2019, 4:01 pm

Hi Elijah,

Chapter 1 was extremely well-read, I absolutely loved Miss Watson's voice! It truly reminded me of the exact character she is, a crochety, picky old woman :lol: In other words, her voice fit her character to a tee :clap:

A few notes on it- these are extremely easy fixes and can most likely be corrected in a few minutes:

~3:29- you said 'and', then changed quickly to 'but'
~3:48- I couldn't tell exactly what the words were. Could you please rerecord those few words? Thank you.
~5:57- there was a pause, a couple seconds long
~8:03- paused in the middle of the word 'tried'
~9:07- said 'put on' instead of 'put out'

Again, these are easy fixes and only a few. This isn't a word perfect project :) Chapter 1 was read excellently, and your character voices are so good! You completely bring them to life with the original accents and manner of speaking- it's better than some of my dramatic reading characters! Sometimes I just can't get the voices to sound lifelike enough and with a lot of zeal- you've mastered that, clearly!
--Rachel--
Dumbledore watched the doe fly away, and as her silvery glow faded he turned back to Snape, and his eyes were full of tears.
"After all this time?"
"Always," said Snape
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Post by JayKitty76 » February 14th, 2019, 4:58 pm

Hi Elijah,
Chapter 26 was read extremely well. Your character voices are simply outstanding! Amazing...

A few PL notes:

~5:30- said 'can' instead of 'can't'
~5:44- long, three-second pause
~8:07- slight stumble on 'anybody could tell you hain't'- repeated 'you' twice
~12:23- said 'my friend's made up' instead of 'my mind's made up'
~13:07- slight stumble- said 'ther' and then 'they'
~15:08- slight stumble- said 'hadn't been', then said 'hadn't found'
~15:59- said 'flung at our hands'- should be 'flung at our heads'
~17:50- slight stumble- said 'gave' and then 'give in'
~19:32- slight stumble- said 'crammed in, it in

I know it looks like a lot, but it's not that much and they are simple fixes. Great job- I love your character voices!
God bless,
JayKitty
--Rachel--
Dumbledore watched the doe fly away, and as her silvery glow faded he turned back to Snape, and his eyes were full of tears.
"After all this time?"
"Always," said Snape
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Post by ej400 » February 14th, 2019, 5:38 pm

JayKitty76 wrote:
February 14th, 2019, 4:58 pm
Hi Elijah,
Chapter 26 was read extremely well. Your character voices are simply outstanding! Amazing...

A few PL notes:

~5:30- said 'can' instead of 'can't'
~5:44- long, three-second pause
~8:07- slight stumble on 'anybody could tell you hain't'- repeated 'you' twice
~12:23- said 'my friend's made up' instead of 'my mind's made up'
~13:07- slight stumble- said 'ther' and then 'they'
~15:08- slight stumble- said 'hadn't been', then said 'hadn't found'
~15:59- said 'flung at our hands'- should be 'flung at our heads'
~17:50- slight stumble- said 'gave' and then 'give in'
~19:32- slight stumble- said 'crammed in, it in

I know it looks like a lot, but it's not that much and they are simple fixes. Great job- I love your character voices!
God bless,
JayKitty
Thank you Jaykitty, I have already fixed the PL notes from lmnei's PL notes. Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed my character impressions :D

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Post by JayKitty76 » February 15th, 2019, 12:04 pm

ej400 wrote:
February 15th, 2019, 9:52 am
Here is a new Chapter 26:

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/huckfinn_29_twain_128kb.mp3 -23:16

Thank you!
Thanks.
Looks like you uploaded chapter 29...did you mean 26 or 29? :wink:
--Rachel--
Dumbledore watched the doe fly away, and as her silvery glow faded he turned back to Snape, and his eyes were full of tears.
"After all this time?"
"Always," said Snape
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Post by ej400 » February 15th, 2019, 6:02 pm

:lol: <laughing> 29. I kept getting the two messed up for some reason

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Post by fshort » February 15th, 2019, 8:21 pm

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Post by JayKitty76 » February 16th, 2019, 10:01 am

fshort wrote:
February 15th, 2019, 8:21 pm
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/huckfinn_20_twain_128kb.mp3
duration: 25:55
Thank you!
--Rachel--
Dumbledore watched the doe fly away, and as her silvery glow faded he turned back to Snape, and his eyes were full of tears.
"After all this time?"
"Always," said Snape
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Post by JayKitty76 » February 16th, 2019, 10:01 am

ej400 wrote:
February 15th, 2019, 6:02 pm
:lol: <laughing> 29. I kept getting the two messed up for some reason
Me too lol :lol: :lol: <eyeroll>
--Rachel--
Dumbledore watched the doe fly away, and as her silvery glow faded he turned back to Snape, and his eyes were full of tears.
"After all this time?"
"Always," said Snape
.

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Post by ej400 » February 16th, 2019, 9:05 pm

Thank you Jaykitty76! I don't mean to be bossy, and I really don't mean it that way, but can you please edit the MW? It just helps me, because I usually look at my reader page's "reader section details", so I know what I should do next... whether it's editing my recordings with PL notes, or what I should record next.

Thank you
Elijah

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