COMPLETE SOLO Living With Our Children by Clara D. Pierson-mas
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No problem! I have plenty to listen to in the meantime. I'll keep on giving feedback, but don't feel pressured to get to them quickly. Whenever is totally fine.
Chapter 2 is almost there, only comment is that the ending silence is a bit long. Maybe cut it down a few seconds? Sounded great otherwise!
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I ended up finding a bit of time this evening. I've made those changes to the preface and first 2 chapters you mentioned. I also made the decibels a bit more consistent for all the chapters I've uploaded so far. Thank you for your keen listening!
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Great! All fixed now! And the decibels are almost identical . Hope to get to more soon!
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Chapter 3 notes:
4:29 - missing word 'to'
I'm enjoying this more than I expected! It amuses me in a strange way! Can't wait to listen to more!
4:29 - missing word 'to'
I'm enjoying this more than I expected! It amuses me in a strange way! Can't wait to listen to more!
Campbell
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Chapter 4 has a few more notes than the previous ones:
2:32 - missing word 'how'
3:50 - missing words 'so long as they are always kind jokes'
4:20 - added word 'of'
Can't wait to listen more tomorrow!
2:32 - missing word 'how'
3:50 - missing words 'so long as they are always kind jokes'
4:20 - added word 'of'
Can't wait to listen more tomorrow!
Campbell
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Chapter 5 notes:
Beginning silence is a tad over 1 second, we ask for no more than 0.5-1 second of silence
0:48 - heard 'or', text says 'of'
0:59 - heard 'we may decide to go on', text says 'we decide and go on'
1:32 - heard 'particularly', text says 'peculiarly'
Loving it! Looking forwards to hearing the 'Embarrassing Questions' section
Beginning silence is a tad over 1 second, we ask for no more than 0.5-1 second of silence
0:48 - heard 'or', text says 'of'
0:59 - heard 'we may decide to go on', text says 'we decide and go on'
1:32 - heard 'particularly', text says 'peculiarly'
Loving it! Looking forwards to hearing the 'Embarrassing Questions' section
Campbell
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Chapter 6 is PL OK
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Chapter 7 notes:
1:52 - heard 'canjoled', text says 'cajoled'
4:25 - heard 'thing', text says 'things'
7:14 - missing word 'same'
10:18 - missing text 'want to ask questions'
This chapter was not at all what I expected
1:52 - heard 'canjoled', text says 'cajoled'
4:25 - heard 'thing', text says 'things'
7:14 - missing word 'same'
10:18 - missing text 'want to ask questions'
This chapter was not at all what I expected
Campbell
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Chapter 8 notes:
Beginning silence on the edge of being too long, may want to cut it down a half second or so
3:47 - heard 'amiable', text says 'amenable'
6:15 - missing word 'with'
Beginning silence on the edge of being too long, may want to cut it down a half second or so
3:47 - heard 'amiable', text says 'amenable'
6:15 - missing word 'with'
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Chapter 9 notes:
1:46 - heard 'appointment', text says 'apportionment'
3:17 - heard 'onset', text says 'outset'
3:38 - heard 'earned', text says 'other'
1:46 - heard 'appointment', text says 'apportionment'
3:17 - heard 'onset', text says 'outset'
3:38 - heard 'earned', text says 'other'
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Chapter 10 notes:
6:21 - heard 'tranquillity', text says 'tranquilly'
Got through all that's been recorded! I really enjoyed it, and can't wait for more (no pressure though, just record when you can, doesn't have to get done quickly ).
6:21 - heard 'tranquillity', text says 'tranquilly'
Got through all that's been recorded! I really enjoyed it, and can't wait for more (no pressure though, just record when you can, doesn't have to get done quickly ).
Campbell
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