COMPLETE[PLAYS]One Act Play Collection 011-thw
Great. Thank you.
Todd
Todd
thank you for PLing the Princess for me, Todd
Meanwhile I cleaned up the MW. I moved all the finished play up and created a sections-to-be-deleted part.
Only 2 plays still to do: The Vampire Cat and A Day Well Spent.
Since James seems to be busy right now, I will try to PL those three recorded sections today.
Stay tuned
Sonia
Meanwhile I cleaned up the MW. I moved all the finished play up and created a sections-to-be-deleted part.
Only 2 plays still to do: The Vampire Cat and A Day Well Spent.
Since James seems to be busy right now, I will try to PL those three recorded sections today.
Stay tuned
Sonia
so you've waited long enough for feedback, TJ. Miss Brown is wonderfully done. Each new time she says "my dear !" I had to giggle I think this will all sound very funny in dialogue later on.benderca wrote: ↑November 28th, 2018, 4:45 pmHere's Miss Brown in A Day Well Spent:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/daywellspent_missbrown_oxenford.mp3
Thanks, PL ok.
Sonia
indeed .... and I also wonder how practicable this was to play on stage, since basically every short scene played in a totally different setting. Usually you have one setting for one act, here there are dozens of settings in what is apparently a one-acter. I find this highly strange.Availle wrote: ↑January 12th, 2019, 7:37 pmHere's the narrator for "A Day Well Spent", some 16 minutes long. No noisecleaning.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/adaywellspent_narrator_128kb.mp3
No wonder this is not going anywhere, half of the time people are talking "aside".
So...with all the asides, unfortunately in the first 4 minutes you missed all of the character names when the "aside" was at the beginning of the speech. I noted them all down for you, but I must admit, I was relieved when all of a sudden you started saying them after 4 minutes. Otherwise the proofing would have taken me much longer.
Luckily it's only 5 different names, so it's probably easy to copy/paste them. I hope I got them all right. Quite tricky with so many asides one after the other.
> at 0:53: Cotton, aside
> at 0:55: Cutaway, aside
> at 1:21: Mizzle, aside
> at 2:21: Bolt, knocking at door
> at 3:00: Mizzle, aside
> at 3:05: Mizzle, aside
> at 3:08: Bolt, aside
> at 3:14: Mrs Stitchley, aside
> at 3:20: Mizzle, aside
> at 3:34: Mizzle, aside
> at 3:53: Bolt, aside
> at 3:55: Mizzle, aside
> at 7:31: Bolt (horn sounds): I think here we can leave Bolt out, because the action doesn’t characterize Bolt’s speech
> at 10:48: Bolt, Mizzle and Cutaway, together: this will be voice merging, probably can be cut out entirely
> at about 14:00: missing line: “does so”
> at 15:35: Mizzle, aside
> also the volume was a bit under 85 dB, but I suspect that was because of the long pauses in-between. Anyway, the volume will get adjusted by the editor later on.
thank you, nicely narrated. Agreeable to listen to.
Sonia
ok and the last one was a quickie but very well done, Campbell. I already like the voice credit which you already say in character nice touch. Well in the beginning he is a big-mouther, but at the end a bit squeamish, hehe.lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑January 28th, 2019, 8:00 pmGot him read!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/adaywellspent_peterprig_oxenford.mp3
Recording time: 1:09 mins
Totally PL ok. Thanks for the quick turn-around.
So we're really only waiting for James' last role to come in and two plays to be assembled. Can we make it before the one-year mark ?
Sonia
Thanks for your thorough PLing Sonia - and sorry for the mess!
I THINK I got them all in at the right spots. But there are plenty of lonely "asides" to choose from, still.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/adaywellspent_narrator_128kb.mp3
I THINK I got them all in at the right spots. But there are plenty of lonely "asides" to choose from, still.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/adaywellspent_narrator_128kb.mp3
Cheers, Ava.
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indeed. This was quite tricky to Spot PL as well. I found a few spots that were on the wrong place, but since all the parts are in, I think I will simply put a note in the MW and the editor will find their way around.
> between 3:28 and 3:40: I think we now have one aside too many I don't know how but I couldn't find 4 in a row no matter
> at 14:11: "does so", belongs a bit further at 14:16
> at 15:49: "Mizzle aside" belongs a bit further at 15:54
I'll mark it PL ok now with the notes to editor. Thanks Ava, it was not easy to plough through that
That only leaves James' role to come in....
Todd: I sent a PM to shineko some time ago, but she is absent since December and hasn't even picked it up yet. Should we take some action there soon ?
Sonia
Zames has been around as near as Feb 4th, but has not responded to my latest PM which I will resend.
I'll assemble shineko's play.
Thanks, Todd
I'll assemble shineko's play.
Thanks, Todd
Missing an Ito Soda line in Vampire Cat: "So will I wait the moment."
Thanks, Todd
Thanks, Todd
I have uploaded a draft of Vampire Cat. Not ready for PL yet - missing a line by Ito Soda. (PM sent.)
Thanks, Todd
Thanks, Todd
PM from Zames - he is working on it now.
Thanks, Todd
Yes, I PM'd Chuck.
Thanks, Todd
Thanks, Todd
Whoops! Sorry guys. Haven't been paying attention and didn't notice this until Todd sent me the PM. Here's the missing line:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vampirecat_ito_missingline.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vampirecat_ito_missingline.mp3
PROJECTS
Current Solo:Septimius Felton (Hawthorne's final novel)
Help Needed: Strange Interlude (O'Neill's Freudian melodrama - roles available!)
Current Solo:Septimius Felton (Hawthorne's final novel)
Help Needed: Strange Interlude (O'Neill's Freudian melodrama - roles available!)
Vampire Cat is ready for final PL.
Thanks, Todd
Thanks, Todd