COMPLETE [SOLO, RUSSIAN] Vladislav Khodasevich, Poetry and Translations-mas

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » January 25th, 2019, 6:47 am

Thank you, Marina and Gingema!

marinal88 · Post by **marinal88** » January 26th, 2019, 12:31 pm

PL for Section 4 - sounds fine.
PL for Section 6 - sounds fine.

I won't be able to PL other sections of Khodasevich project.
Thank you

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » January 26th, 2019, 4:18 pm

Thank you, Marina, your effort is appreciated!

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » January 27th, 2019, 8:22 pm

Uploaded:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetry_13_khodasevich_128kb.mp3 [3:46]
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetry_14_khodasevich_128kb.mp3 [19:49]

MaryAnn, we found and lost a DPL, she has checked a few sections meanwhile...
Also I'd like to delete sec.16: the last poet is presented by just a few lines, it would have been a one-minute section, so I'd like to merge two, if you don't mind.

Post by **Kikisaulite** » January 27th, 2019, 8:46 pm

Hi, Mark!
I could do some PLing for this - my next couple of days look very suitable for PLing. I do not promise to be fast or do all of them, but still that would be something.

Kristine

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » January 28th, 2019, 6:31 am

Kikisaulite wrote: ↑January 27th, 2019, 8:46 pm Hi, Mark!
I could do some PLing for this - my next couple of days look very suitable for PLing. I do not promise to be fast or do all of them, but still that would be something.

Kristine

Oh, Kristine, thank you so much, you are coming to my rescue again

What you can do and how fast - does not matter, I am not working fast myself.
Your help is much appreciated, and I'd be glad to help you PLing your narration in English or Russian. Sorry, cannot help with Latvian...
Please note: Gingema promised to PL Chernikhovsky, and I hope she would because she speaks Hebrew and might be helpful with some words pronunciation. Please start with others.

Post by **Kikisaulite** » January 28th, 2019, 6:06 pm

Listened to section 13 - very beautiful poetry and very very nice reading!
I have only one comment, and it is up to you to decide if it is worth correcting. Around 1:26 in sentence Прохлады жаждущих, испепеленных жнитв you read ждущих instead of жаждущих. Though in its sense very close, it still is a word of different meaning. Otherwise this section is OK!

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » January 30th, 2019, 5:47 pm

Kikisaulite wrote: ↑January 28th, 2019, 6:06 pm Listened to section 13 - very beautiful poetry and very very nice reading!
I have only one comment, and it is up to you to decide if it is worth correcting. Around 1:26 in sentence Прохлады жаждущих, испепеленных жнитв you read ждущих instead of жаждущих. Though in its sense very close, it still is a word of different meaning. Otherwise this section is OK!

Thank you, Kristine, for your kind words!
The last section is ready:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetry_15_khodasevich_128kb.mp3 [8:09]

Post by **Kikisaulite** » January 30th, 2019, 7:17 pm

karlkuzmich wrote: ↑January 30th, 2019, 5:47 pm
The last section is ready:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetry_15_khodasevich_128kb.mp3 [8:09]

This last section is PL OK!

Post by **MaryAnnSpiegel** » January 30th, 2019, 8:14 pm

Kristine,
You've got access to the MW if you would like to update statuses.
MaryAnn

Post by **Kikisaulite** » January 30th, 2019, 8:46 pm

Thanks, MaryAnn!

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » January 31st, 2019, 11:50 am

Kikisaulite wrote: ↑January 28th, 2019, 6:06 pm Listened to section 13 ... Around 1:26 in sentence Прохлады жаждущих, испепеленных жнитв you read ждущих instead of жаждущих.

Thank you for careful listening! Fixed, ready for spot-PL!
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetry_13_khodasevich_128kb.mp3

Post by **Kikisaulite** » February 1st, 2019, 5:17 pm

Section 13 now OK!

Post by **Kikisaulite** » February 1st, 2019, 5:51 pm

And section 14 is PL OK!

Should I go on and listen to the rest or there is still this other listener doing that?

chulsky · Post by **chulsky** » February 2nd, 2019, 8:38 am

Kikisaulite wrote: ↑February 1st, 2019, 5:51 pm Should I go on and listen to the rest or there is still this other listener doing that?

Thank you very much, Kristine!
The Черниховский sections are longer, and were hard to read, but the poetry is excellent in my view. There are also a few Yiddish and Hebrew proper names, and I am not sure I handled them right and hoped for Gingema's help (she is an Israeli). However she is sick and swamped in other chores.
If you are not intimidated, please try to listen, I would appreciate your PL very much!
Don't feel you have to catch intricacies of all the foreign words.