Ok, Act 1 is PL ok
And also Act 4 was wonderful to listen to. The scene with the soldiers and Kate was predictably entertaining
Must have been a riot on stage with so many people.
I have one note for your consideration:
> at 0:36
: this may be optional, but I think we need an "aside
" here before "I am reduced to a necessity of trusting him" because it's not so clear that she is not saying this aloud to Trusty which would sound strange
I leave that up to you, Todd.
For the rest, all is perfect. This play can get archived today
Looking forward to the next Steele.