COMPLETE The Daredevil by Maria Thompson Daviess - dc

Post by **craigdav1** » January 21st, 2019, 8:33 pm

LikeManyWaters wrote: ↑
January 21st, 2019, 8:28 pm
I was afraid of that...
What would you advise this far along?

I should have been more clear in my comment. I don't consider what you are doing, "different voices." I was referring to when readers create vastly different (and often strange sounding) voices for different characters. Small differences help the listener without being a distraction from the prose.

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 21st, 2019, 8:46 pm

Oh, I see now. I'm glad you do not think I should try to stop, b/c I'm not sure if I could.

I just didn't want the characters to get mixed up and confusing.

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 21st, 2019, 9:20 pm

Chapter 13 ready.

Post by **craigdav1** » January 22nd, 2019, 6:50 am

13 PL OK.

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 22nd, 2019, 7:01 pm

Chapter 14 ready for PL.

Post by **craigdav1** » January 22nd, 2019, 8:19 pm

14 PL OK!

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 22nd, 2019, 10:05 pm

Chapter 15 ready.

Post by **craigdav1** » January 23rd, 2019, 7:15 am

15 PL OK.

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 23rd, 2019, 5:13 pm

Chapter 16 ready.

Post by **craigdav1** » January 23rd, 2019, 7:18 pm

16 PL OK!

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 24th, 2019, 10:34 am

Chapter 17 ready.

Post by **craigdav1** » January 24th, 2019, 1:27 pm

17 PL OK!

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 25th, 2019, 11:17 am

Chapter 18 ready for PL.

Post by **craigdav1** » January 25th, 2019, 12:14 pm

18 PL OK!

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 25th, 2019, 3:02 pm

Thank you. I couldn't resist one more...
Chapter 19 ready.