COMPLETE The Daredevil by Maria Thompson Daviess - dc

Post by **craigdav1** » January 16th, 2019, 7:29 am

5 PL OK.

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 16th, 2019, 9:14 pm

Chapter 6 ready.

Post by **craigdav1** » January 16th, 2019, 9:34 pm

6 PL OK!

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 17th, 2019, 9:12 pm

Double Feature: Chapters 7 and 8.

Post by **craigdav1** » January 18th, 2019, 7:15 am

7-8 PL OK.

slimness, a problem?

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 18th, 2019, 8:07 pm

LOL

Curves, anyways.

Chapter 9 ready.

Post by **craigdav1** » January 18th, 2019, 9:02 pm

9 PL OK.

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 19th, 2019, 10:41 am

Chapter 10 ready for PL.

Half-way party:

Post by **craigdav1** » January 19th, 2019, 11:23 am

10 PL OK. Yay!

MW title missing "the"

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 19th, 2019, 11:27 am

Oops! Fixed it.

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 19th, 2019, 7:16 pm

Chapter 11 ready.

Post by **craigdav1** » January 19th, 2019, 9:05 pm

11 PL OK.

cowlick....hmmm.

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 21st, 2019, 5:42 pm

Chapter 12 ready.

I hope all those "male voices" are staying different enough not to confuse characters...

Post by **craigdav1** » January 21st, 2019, 8:25 pm

12 PL OK.

Doing different voices is distracting to me.

LikeManyWaters · Post by **LikeManyWaters** » January 21st, 2019, 8:28 pm

I was afraid of that...
What would you advise this far along?