ah wonderful performance, Bhavya. This was my favourite scene for Angelique. She tries the begging for mercy thing first, but then she shows her real anger and distate for her husband. Very forcefully acted.
Loved it !
I have a few corrections for this act though:
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at 2:20: (p. 267) “and that you
have reason to complain” – you say “you have
no reason”, which is wrong in this case
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at 4:56-5:00 (p. 268) “and with this knife...” you can
cut this version out here, as it’s repeated later once more
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at 5:58-5:59 (p. 269) “and who has not scrupled to take her own life” – I would
cut the longer pause in between
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at 7:40-7:41: (p. 270) “most extravagant behaviour” –
pause here also feels a bit long
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at 8:39: (p. 272) “and I beg of you” – you say “I beg
you of you”, which sounds a bit strange
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at 9:09-9:12: (p. 273) “overlook such insults, but, whatever violence” –
long pause
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at 9:21-9:24 (p. 273) “will be of no use; we shall have to recommence” – also
long pause
thank you for this great act ! Really well done.
Sonia