MajorToast wrote: ↑January 11th, 2019, 11:45 am Submitted for Madame's approval.
Madame approves
this performance is simply brilliant ! I especially loved the final apology, you literally gnashing your teeth and barely restraining your boiling rage. I can already picture this scene with Todd giving you instructions.
Wonderful.
You also managed to make the soliloquies very lively. All in all, an awesome performance. I'm very happy that you overcame your initial intimidation
speaking of which. Dandin isn't very much intimidated by his in-laws...at least not in the first act.
You give us quite some lip, young man. Mind your station.
PL ok in any case. There were a few small deviations from the text, but nothing changing the meaning really, so all is well.
Just one small note:
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at 9:28: you give two versions of "Thus if I had found him in bed...." is there one you prefer and you only forgot to cut the other or do you let Todd choose ?
oh and I nearly forgot: for the
file-name, always include the Act
number, not your initials. Otherwise the second act will overwrite your first act
"georgedandin_george
_1_128kb"
not "georgedandin_george
_mt_128kb". No need to reupload this act, unless you want to make the cut, but remember for next act.
Sonia