I absolutely loved the high pitched prim voice of Iris. And there is a very cool reverb, not as much as mine but still noticeable, as if you spoke from the bottom of a pit maybe. Cool effect. And the slight giggle was simply a treat.
I hope you haven't put away your falsetto yet, because you forgot quite a few lines
Iris shows up a bit later still. Can you add those lines at the end of your recording please ?
"You nymphs, call’d Naiads, of the windring brooks,
With your sedged crowns and ever-harmless looks,
Leave your crisp channels, and on this green land
Answer your summons; Juno does command:
Come, temperate nymphs, and help to celebrate
A contract of true love; be not too late."
"You sunburnt sicklemen, of August weary,
Come hither from the furrow, and be merry:
Make holiday; your rye-straw hats put on,
And these fresh nymphs encounter every one
In country footing."
All the other parts are PL ok