(SOLO) Mark Twain- A Biography by Albert Bigelow Paine- Volume III - dlo

johng · Post by **johng** » December 9th, 2018, 8:10 am

14 & 15 are done

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » December 9th, 2018, 1:03 pm

sect 14
PL OK

sect 15
PL note: word change

00:18 The ''Christian'' number of ...s/b ''Christmas''

johng · Post by **johng** » December 9th, 2018, 2:54 pm

HZFerr wrote: ↑December 9th, 2018, 1:03 pm
sect 15
PL note: word change

00:18 The ''Christian'' number of ...s/b ''Christmas''

15 corrected
&
16 is done

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » December 9th, 2018, 9:33 pm

sect 15

spot PL OK

johng · Post by **johng** » December 10th, 2018, 6:55 am

17&18 are done

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » December 10th, 2018, 6:14 pm

sect 16
PL note: extra word

18:17 The doctor & a specialist met ''me'' in conspiracy five...remove the word "me"

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » December 10th, 2018, 6:32 pm

sect 17 & 18
PL OK

johng · Post by **johng** » December 11th, 2018, 7:16 pm

16 is corrected
and
19 is done

johng · Post by **johng** » December 12th, 2018, 1:51 pm

20 is done
note: "22" months instead of "as" months!!

this was a tough chapter!!!

johng · Post by **johng** » December 14th, 2018, 10:32 am

21 & 22 are done

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » December 15th, 2018, 8:55 am

sect 16
spot PL OK

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » December 15th, 2018, 9:16 am

sect 19
PL OK

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » December 15th, 2018, 9:36 am

Hi John,
I am so sorry having to do this, finding an error in this section feels unconscionable.

This section will bring tears to all that hear it.

sect 20
07:09 I bent over her & looked ''her in the'' face...s/b looked ''in her'' face

johng · Post by **johng** » December 17th, 2018, 9:39 am

HZFerr wrote: ↑December 15th, 2018, 9:36 am Hi John,
I am so sorry having to do this, finding an error in this section feels unconscionable.
This section will bring tears to all that hear it.
sect 20
07:09 I bent over her & looked ''her in the'' face...s/b looked ''in her'' face

sad indeed!!

20 is corrected
23 is done- note ending has reference to Project Gutenberg editor "DW"

HZFerr · Post by **HZFerr** » December 17th, 2018, 5:46 pm

sect 20
spot PL OK

Beautifully read! (I bent over her & looked in her face) Perfect amount of feeling conveyed!