COMPLETE [Weekly Poem] Thou Shalt Not Kill by G. K. Chesterton - dl

[aradlaw]

Here is my reading, could someone please PL ?
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/thoushaltnotkill_chesterton_dl_128kb.mp3
1:29

[pschempf]

PL okay, David!

[aradlaw]

Thanks for the PL Phil.

[RajVO]

Here's my recording:
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/thoushaltnotkill_chestoerton_raj_128kb.mp3
Duration is 1:27.

[aradlaw]

Thank you Raj, there is one extra word.. at 0:57 you've read " For some one soul you would take the world away—"
text reads... "For some one soul you take the world away—"

[RajVO]

Thank you Raj, there is one extra word.. at 0:57 you've read " For some one soul you would take the world away—"
text reads... "For some one soul you take the world away—"

Thanks David, for your feedback.
I listened to it again, and there's no extra word 'would'.
But the word 'you' seems to be a bit long.
Please listen again, and if necessary, I'll record it again.
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/thoushaltnotkill_chestoerton_raj_128kb.mp3
Thanks, Raj.

[silverquill]

One more:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/thoushaltnotkill_chesterton_lcw_128kb.mp3 1:28

[aradlaw]

Thanks David, for your feedback.
I listened to it again, and there's no extra word 'would'.

You are right Raj, listening with my 'morning ears' I do not hear the "would" I heard late last night.

[aradlaw]

Thank you Larry.

[jfgallagher]

One more to add to the list:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/thoushaltnotkill_chesterton_jfg_128kb.mp3
recording time 01:22

Jim

[msfry]

Haven't been recording for 10 days due to a nasty bronchial infection that has laid me low, coughing, and unable to talk. But I figured maybe I could pull off something short that doesn't matter much if I sound raspy, out of breath, near death's door.

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/thoushaltnotkill_chesterton_mtf_128kb.mp3 1:31

[RajVO]

Thanks David, for your feedback.
I listened to it again, and there's no extra word 'would'.

You are right Raj, listening with my 'morning ears' I do not hear the "would" I heard late last night.

Sounds good. Thanks David, for listening to it again.

[aradlaw]

Thank you Jim and Michele.

[Claire]

Here's mine at 1:31:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/thoushaltnotkill_chesterton_lah_128kb.mp3

[aradlaw]

Thank you Lee Ann.